Topic: Balance
s1owhand's photo
Thu 01/10/08 09:11 PM
Balance

the rope we walk is full of slack
swing it beneath us or
swing ourselves above
these clubs are props
which cannot insure
safety nor amusement
when there is no net
and winds are high between
two distant supports
i call this platform "home"
and that one "boredom"
but all the action is
in between
instability with adrenaline
everyone wondering
when comes the fall

bstick4u's photo
Thu 01/10/08 09:13 PM
Very creative,you put effort int this and it shows!glasses

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 01/10/08 09:15 PM
smokin

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/10/08 09:35 PM
good one s-hand

s1owhand's photo
Thu 01/10/08 10:09 PM
ty bstick, mirror, kc

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/10/08 10:13 PM
bigsmile

no photo
Fri 01/11/08 07:01 AM

Balance

the rope we walk is full of slack
swing it beneath us or
swing ourselves above
these clubs are props
which cannot insure
safety nor amusement
when there is no net
and winds are high between
two distant supports
i call this platform "home"
and that one "boredom"
but all the action is
in between
instability with adrenaline
everyone wondering
when comes the fall


Sigh.....wonderful write s1ow.....really wonderful....

LAMom's photo
Fri 01/11/08 07:14 AM
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm most esquisite flowerforyou

klugman's photo
Fri 01/11/08 07:19 AM
very nice

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 01/11/08 08:20 AM
good one see I knew my rope would come in handy bigsmile

no photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:49 AM
great writing:smile: :smile:

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 01/11/08 10:29 AM
bigsmile :heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:04 PM
(((Slow))) drinker