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Topic: Carnal pleasures
iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:44 AM
Edited by iamgeorgiagirl on Tue 01/08/08 12:45 AM
Once upon a crystal moonlight,
She held his hand oh so tight.
He lightly kissed her on her lips,
Loving each other joining hips.

Looking into each others eyes
Carnal pleasures materialized.
Soul to soul, heart to heart,
They didn't want to be apart.

Heavens beauty love so divine,
Two souls together lost in time.
Wishing it would never end;
Toss all troubles in the wind.

Enjoying it all pure ecstacy,
A little bit of you and a bit of me.
The stars twinkled in the night;
We held each other oh so tight.

Sweet, wet kisses everywhere,
Into each others eyes we stare.
Intimate gestures between you & I
Hoping our love will never die.

Sportie2's photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:49 AM
BRAVO MY FRIEND, FINELY A TREASURE!flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:50 AM
That was real nice. One of the best Ive seen yet. Yep, Im a hopeless romantic,lol:wink:

chevylover1965's photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:51 AM
i like it !flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:52 AM
I thought Cindy had talent till I read this!!!

Peccy's photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:52 AM
Nice write

iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:53 AM
Thanks y'all glad you like it!

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iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Tue 01/08/08 12:55 AM

Nice write

I really liked yours a lot it was very moving! Thanks!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:13 AM
Edited by Wolfeyes58 on Tue 01/08/08 08:18 AM

Thanks y'all glad you like it!

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That was a beautiful poem. Would like to see more. Very good.

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:20 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou Nice

songstress1's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:21 AM
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Dragoness's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:23 AM
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TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/08/08 09:00 AM
Very good enjoyed it welcome to the site hope to see more of your writingsbigsmile

iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Tue 01/08/08 09:36 AM

Very good enjoyed it welcome to the site hope to see more of your writingsbigsmile

Thank you so much!

happy

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/08/08 09:38 AM
welcome

that was good...hope to see more

flowerforyou

iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Wed 01/09/08 04:05 PM

welcome

that was good...hope to see more

flowerforyou


Thanks KC

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iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Sun 02/10/08 11:06 AM
One look inside your gorgeous eyes
Makes me feel that I am mesmerized
A sweet, soft touch of your sweet lips
Makes my heart feel like doing flips.

The sweetest smile across a handsome face
makes me glad to be part of the human race
Euphoric fantasy played out in my mind
And oh yes it is that carnal pleasure kind.

Hard and soft skin our bodies do feel
Oh thank God it's all very much real.
Romantic pleasure is just so very fine
Let's go there again it's better than wine.

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MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 02/10/08 01:12 PM
flowerforyou

iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Sun 02/10/08 01:18 PM

flowerforyou


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iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Sat 02/16/08 12:15 PM
Imaginary lover help me make it last
Imaginary lover my present and the past
Imaginary lover make me feel I am loved
Imaginary lover never will he be shoved

Imaginary lover perfect in every way
Imaginary lover with me night and day
Imaginary lover makes me feel so good
Imaginary lover materialized if I could

Imaginary lover never makes me cry
Imaginary lover never has to die
Imaginary lover never wants to fight
Imaginary lover everything’s alright

Imaginary lover finds the perfect spot
Imaginary lover looks so very hot
Imaginary lover is always faithful and true
Imaginary lover doesn’t tell me what to do

Imaginary lover gets along with everyone
Imaginary lover makes everyday so fun
Imaginary lover holds me when I’m blue
Imaginary lover is really someone like you

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