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Topic: “I Want”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Sat 01/05/08 10:33 PM
“I Want” I want to be the one. That when the day is done. It is me you think about. The one you never doubt. I want to be the one. At the end of the day you call hon. And I’m the one that you see. And you’re right where you want to be. I want to be the one. That you run. To when ever you are lonely or down. That it is me there when you look around. I want to be the one. That can’t be outdone. That you will always share. Your life with and always care. I want to be the one. That brings in the sun. That puts the smile on your face. And it’s me you embrace. I want to be the one. You want to be with in the long run. That each and every day. You are happy I came your way. K.L.M 1/6/2008

johncarl Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 5074	Sat 01/05/08 10:42 PM
i love it

WM777 Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 573	Sat 01/05/08 10:44 PM
i want,i want,,,,,,that sounds like a 5 year old child...............

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 01/05/08 10:46 PM
but you are already one that puts a smile on many faces you are one that makes many people think you are one that brings joy to the lives of others you are one that incites laughter you are one that reminds us that live is not always cartwheels and cotton candy you are all of these things and much more to so many “I want” for you to find what you want kc

Twylia Joined Fri 10/27/06 Posts: 10	Sat 01/05/08 10:48 PM
that was a beautiful poem

chevylover1965 Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 43370	Sat 01/05/08 10:51 PM
AAAAA++++++ GREAT POEM !

wolfchic Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 8036	Sat 01/05/08 11:05 PM
Good one as always.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Sat 01/05/08 11:09 PM
johncarl thank you for reading WM777 hehe but made you read it humm one must at times let the child within speak Twylia thank you very much and welcome to the site chevylover1965 awwww thank you as well wolfchic thank you for your kind words as always

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Sat 01/05/08 11:11 PM
but you are already one that puts a smile on many faces you are one that makes many people think you are one that brings joy to the lives of others you are one that incites laughter you are one that reminds us that live is not always cartwheels and cotton candy you are all of these things and much more to so many “I want” for you to find what you want kc Awwww kc once again your words impress me thank you for all you just said you surely just made my night. My wish is for you and all that are here to find that one that makes their heart shine within.

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sun 01/06/08 06:55 AM
I THINK U R GETTING NEAR THE ONE U WANT MIRA

chuck366 Joined Tue 10/16/07 Posts: 4666	Sun 01/06/08 06:57 AM
nice

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 01/06/08 07:07 AM
I want to always be your friend... I want to be till the end... I want to be here if you need me To be the friend that you can see. Friends always Kristi.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Sun 01/06/08 07:25 AM
frank hummm ya think so frank maybe one never knows chuck thank you very much for reading Robert friends are a blessig to have thank you

Snugglesbyfire Joined Sun 04/15/07 Posts: 24422	Sun 01/06/08 07:39 AM
ahh Kristi you put into words what everyone wishes and wants for. Very nice write

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Sun 01/06/08 07:55 AM
very nice

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 01/06/08 11:53 AM
Puddin Cup I want the world for you,,, Hugs to you

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Sun 01/06/08 08:51 PM
Snugglesbyfire your right it is something we all want and some day hopefully we all will find it lol Dragoness thank you Denise thank you girl maybe some day