Topic: not conceded just convinced
chris's photo
Mon 06/24/24 07:24 PM
digital media guy who spends to much time in the television studio. any thoughts

motowndowntown's photo
Mon 06/24/24 10:04 PM
Looks okay to me.

Used to do some TV direction eons ago. Loved it.

Mortman's photo
Mon 06/24/24 10:17 PM
I think you meant "conceited" and not "conceded." You've got some good, clear photos, along with the weird ones, but overall, it's an OK profile. Could be better.

Your blurb doesn't say much about you. You wrote Hi...I live in Clearwater florida but I'm currently staying in missouri to help my dad with medical problems.

It says what you're doing, and I guess we could get from that that you're a good, caring son, and you value family, but it could also be interpreted as your brothers and sisters couldn't be bothered and you had nothing better going on. Maybe you could take another try at describing yourself and the kind of person you seek. Maybe even saying exactly what you mean.

I like that most of the photos are clear and well-lit, but you're wearing that baseball hat, as if to hide a bald spot. If you're bald, it's Okay. Self-confidence is a good quality. You could do that. A better photo might be where you're wearing a fresh, clean shirt and maybe a smile or otherwise being charming without the hat.

Also, the "Hi.." that gets put into the headline and blurb sections can be replaced with something better. The headline could be a few words laying out your skills or best qualities, or maybe a main point you're trying to get across.

Anyway, you seem like a good-looking guy with a good heart, and many don't even read the text so much, so you should do alright. But for the profile with pictures and text that could be better, I'd rate it 7/10.

Good luck!