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Tears
Riding the wave flowing to and fro between the safety of land to stand and an ocean of fears Unsteady as I stretch for something to hold onto as the madness of thousands upon thousands drops of pain think for my sanity Somewhere within the abyss of where I sink or swim is now a time reserved for something greater than falling drops of insignificant real or imagined memories Tired of crying because no one understands my why yet the river never ends it must be something within me |
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Nice poem .
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Tears
Riding the wave flowing to and fro between the safety of land to stand and an ocean of fears Unsteady as I stretch for something to hold onto as the madness of thousands upon thousands drops of pain think for my sanity Somewhere within the abyss of where I sink or swim is now a time reserved for something greater than falling drops of insignificant real or imagined memories Tired of crying because no one understands my why yet the river never ends it must be something within me Perfectly explained As I read each line, the depth of it made me remember certain situations in my life.. Keep writing, Mig |
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I like your word choices
Short and deep and concise |
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Extraordinary!
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