Can you love me like a child,
when I can chase you for a while,
to watch your playful races resting on my smile?

Will you hide me as a smile,
when I can please your shyness for a while,
to grab your tempting energies on my stressful tale?

Can you see me as a fairy tale,
when I can sing so shriek on your anger's rail,
to hold your egoistic coldness with my possessive seal?

Should you wrap me within your honest seal,
when my love can taste the inner layers of your caring peel,
to blend your wild passions with my kindling soil?

Would you make me toil hard on our bonded soil,
when I lose my balance on your uninterrupted silent foil,
to wake up my interests sleeping on your crazy soul?

Can you stick me close to you as one soul,
when we try to fill the gaps of our opinion's pole,
To accept our sweetest indifferences thus making life blissful?

- Aatheera

Nice poem .

No words are amazing enough to describe how fantastic you make me feel when I go through this Beautiful script . Another radiant piece of writing from you .

Thankyou Julie

Thankyou Paul Grateful for the motivating words you share with your feedback always

"""Thank YOU"""!!!
Eight sweet Letters
One Little Space
Tells you the reason
For the Smile on my Face...!

That's nice Paul Give yourself a little space and time to write down your own thoughtful versions and post them here.. We shall enjoy reading them too

The beauty of work leaves me awed. I try to write, yet my words leave room for improvement. Your work, your poems, are epitome of what I want to write.

How cool your words . You are telling me to Lift a Mountain , when I can't even Lift a Gas Cylinder ..
That's Beyond Belief ..! I am just a Bonafide Reader..

Good one after a long pause

Feeling more blissful
Reading the lines
Coinage of words with cause
It's so be cause of
The link of words across
The formation gets applause !
Nice exhibit tobe applauded
And also uploaded in minds
Everyone have such binds

#Can I Ask...?
No Don't

YOU never Stopped,
Me never Talked,
Still We Popped,
Into Eachother Ee,
Breath Are Calmed,
Heartbeat Is Locked......................
IN



YOU..

sorry, few silky mistook..

As Always
GREAT

I like mature soft intimacy connection how about you?

What does that got to do with this poem?

Thankyou Mig I feel delighted and happy to get your thoughts on my work

Each one of us have the light within us which can be seen through our words when we express
You can also be the source of light thru your words to the readers

Thankyou Vibes

I feel happy to see your efforts in framing up this ribbon of appreciation for me

Should it SNOW?
In Chennai, to let me KNOW?
That Robin will say NO,
If my Questions start to FLOW!
But Still there's no CLUE,
How we got to understand each other in every VIEW,
Thus making our Sky look peaceful and BLUE!!

🤪 And the Silky mistook the Silly Cadbury bites

Thankyou RBN