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Topic: If You Knew My Thoughts
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1525	Mon 12/11/23 03:49 PM
If You Knew My Thoughts Midnight can't sleep not sure if I want to with you next to me Watching you breath after breath as my imagination burns like passion What if I touch you interrupt your dreams to ask if you were dreaming of me because I'm wide awake dreaming of you

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54073	Tue 12/12/23 02:01 AM
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JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Tue 12/12/23 03:21 AM
Nice poem .

AαƚHҽҽɾα Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 3514	Mon 12/18/23 12:21 AM
If You Knew My Thoughts Midnight can't sleep not sure if I want to with you next to me Watching you breath after breath as my imagination burns like passion What if I touch you interrupt your dreams to ask if you were dreaming of me because I'm wide awake dreaming of you That was Lovely, Mig the innocence expressed behind each of the lines make it very special

Unknow Joined Sun 10/29/23 Posts: 468	Tue 12/19/23 06:59 AM
Poem of My First Wife : Eighteen, Whole Life Ahead of Us. Eighteen Candles Burning on Her Cake. Sweet Innocense, Fell in Love with Everything. Fighting Back the Tears, I Read the Note Again. Eighteen Candles Burning in My Mind. Summer's Day and She Passed Away. Birds were Singing in the Summer Sky. Then came the Rains again and its Always the Same, I get Down on My Knees and Pray.

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54073	Tue 12/19/23 07:22 AM
Poem of My First Wife : Eighteen, Whole Life Ahead of Us. Eighteen Candles Burning on Her Cake. Sweet Innocense, Fell in Love with Everything. Fighting Back the Tears, I Read the Note Again. Eighteen Candles Burning in My Mind. Summer's Day and She Passed Away. Birds were Singing in the Summer Sky. Then came the Rains again and its Always the Same, I get Down on My Knees and Pray. Still Alive In Thoughts Words Touching Silence Said Alot.🧎

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Tue 12/19/23 12:34 PM
Poem of My First Wife : Eighteen, Whole Life Ahead of Us. Eighteen Candles Burning on Her Cake. Sweet Innocense, Fell in Love with Everything. Fighting Back the Tears, I Read the Note Again. Eighteen Candles Burning in My Mind. Summer's Day and She Passed Away. Birds were Singing in the Summer Sky. Then came the Rains again and its Always the Same, I get Down on My Knees and Pray. Moving poem.

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19466	Thu 12/21/23 06:08 AM
First stanza , incomplete sentence Again , second stanza something Missing . This is just for your correction, so you can come up with better Rhyming ! Next Time .. Just Okay .

Smokeyblackheart Joined Sun 08/06/23 Posts: 1	Thu 12/21/23 07:56 AM
Daydream By Joe Rock In the realm of daydreams, where fantasies unfurl, I find solace in visions of you, my heart's pearl. Unknown desires dance within my mind's eye, Passion and craving, that's where they lie. Your beauty, a masterpiece, like stars that gleam, Eyes that sparkle, a breathtaking dream. A devilish smile, ruby lips so divine, In daydreams alone, your love intertwines. Your body, a canvas, a work of pure art, Within my daydreams, I explore every part. Running my fingers, tracing every curve, Lost in the ecstasy that our love reserves. In the depths of desire, we both succumb, Moans of pleasure escape as our bodies become one. Orgasmic euphoria, a symphony of delight, In daydreams, this passion reaches its height. But it's not solely lust that my dreams unfold, For happiness and peace, we together hold. Cuddling close, finding solace in embrace, Falling asleep as one, in our love's grace. Though daydreams may be fleeting, a transient bliss, In these reveries, your love I'll always miss. For in daydreams alone, our hearts intertwine, And there, my love, you'll forever be mine.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Thu 12/21/23 12:16 PM
Daydream By Joe Rock In the realm of daydreams, where fantasies unfurl, I find solace in visions of you, my heart's pearl. Unknown desires dance within my mind's eye, Passion and craving, that's where they lie. Your beauty, a masterpiece, like stars that gleam, Eyes that sparkle, a breathtaking dream. A devilish smile, ruby lips so divine, In daydreams alone, your love intertwines. Your body, a canvas, a work of pure art, Within my daydreams, I explore every part. Running my fingers, tracing every curve, Lost in the ecstasy that our love reserves. In the depths of desire, we both succumb, Moans of pleasure escape as our bodies become one. Orgasmic euphoria, a symphony of delight, In daydreams, this passion reaches its height. But it's not solely lust that my dreams unfold, For happiness and peace, we together hold. Cuddling close, finding solace in embrace, Falling asleep as one, in our love's grace. Though daydreams may be fleeting, a transient bliss, In these reveries, your love I'll always miss. For in daydreams alone, our hearts intertwine, And there, my love, you'll forever be mine. Nice poem .