n this world of overwhelming grey ,the sights and sounds of an average day, ugly of uglies and sorrows abound ,flooding our minds it's always around ,were flooded with cruelty and deeds of despair ,escape is a dream surely all of us share, so where can we go to block out the pain, from the horrors endured while devils still reign ,only to each other you can find respite, a moment alone in a world without light ,in the arms of your lover safe and secure, but only a moment fore evil endures ,so take in your treasures and guard them well, like kindness to others and sympathy of the frail ,feeding a child or words intended to ease ,an elderly woman alone as she grieves, helping your neighbors in there time of need they are your garden and your deeds are the seed, from your seed sprouts a treasure of hope and of light a treasue profound a beacon of might, a weapon to wield when surrounded by fright, look to your deeds and walk in there light ,and surely as deeds you carry inside, your courage and strength will surly reside, so please be the lantern as bright as a star for people to follow lost from afar, to instill wonder and hope in their life, and for only a moment they abandon their strife, a moment of peace its price can not be measured, the greater your gift the greater your treasures,so if deeds or the seeds from which treasures sprouts, the greater it grows the more you give out,so guard your treasures well as long as you live ,so when you meet others youve something to give,in darkness Domaine your treasure remains to beat back the horrors and drown out the pain.

Nice write .

How long have you been on this site? That's what we used to say to compliment people's poems when this site was Just Say Hi

I’ve been on here for some years now. Excuse me Sir but it’s not your poem so why should it matter to you how I comment on them. If you don’t like it then keep it to yourself and move on. I know I have a tendency to say the same thing but like the Bobby Brown song “It’s my prerogative”. At least my comments are nice.

You misread me Julie. The phrase " nice write " broke back some fond memories. I apologize for being so forward I hope you have a great day.

Thank you and you too .