Seaside Romance

I see the ocean,the stars,and the moon.
The wind begins to dance as it brings
me your perfume.

I see the sand,the shells, and the
gleam in your eyes,while i become helpless,
water drips down your thighs.

[At that point we hug and then we embrace in a kiss.]

I feel your warmth,the wind,and the
oceans cleanseing mist,all the while my
hearts pounding, by the passion of your kiss.

I feel your love,and the waves from
the riseing tide, than you say to me,
lets find a place to hide

Nice poem .

Imperfective Poetry
Mr. 123 , I would say improve your clarity of words .

I like the ebb and flow of the poem.


Thanks for sharing.

Thank you