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Topic: The Crystal Heart
Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:11 PM



The Crystal Heart

Let me tell you of a tale
From a long time ago,
The tale of the crystal heart
That formed in the new fallen snow.
It formed over night
Where two lovers met,
On their last day of love
No will ever forget.
They kept their love a secret
From those that kept them apart,
Their love knew no bounds
It was deep within their heart.
They would sneak away at times
To their secret hide-a-away,
Where they felt their love
As it grew every day.
No one knew of their meetings
Or even suspected such,
They kept it to themselves
The love they felt so much.
Now the tale must be told
About the crystal heart,
Of the love between these two
That could never drift apart.
They met for the last time
On a cold wintry night,
A blizzard of a storm
It was a chilling sight.
They huddled close together
So they could stay warm,
It was chilling to the bone
They couldn't keep from harm.
They embraced each other
With one last shivering kiss,
They froze together in time
In that one moment of bliss.
The storm was letting up
As the snow gently falls down,
When the townspeople were searching
Looking all around.
They came upon the two lovers
Statues frozen in ice,
No one knew of their love
Or their sacrifice.
But looks of awe befell
Upon the parents' face,
When they saw what had formed
And slowly took place.
A crystal heart had formed
Where the two had embraced,
Sealing their love forever
Where their fate had been graced.

songstress1's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:13 PM
Edited by songstress1 on Tue 01/01/08 07:13 PM
:cry: :cry: :cry: OMG another masterpiece, I see a story forming around this,,, you are going to do it...I feel it in my bones this was very good honey as always.smooched smooched smooched smooched

Noden's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:15 PM
The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever readsad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:16 PM
Very nice! drinker

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:16 PM

:cry: :cry: :cry: OMG another masterpiece, I see a story forming around this,,, you are going to do it...I feel it in my bones this was very good honey as always.smooched smooched smooched smooched

Awww you know how to make a guy blush...that's what I was writing in the car this afternoon. I'm glad you liked it. Now where's your whip?

Tobias1540's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:18 PM
That was really good.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:21 PM
Edited by Wolfeyes58 on Tue 01/01/08 07:40 PM

The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever readsad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:22 PM
MsTeddybear-Thanks Susan glad you liked it..

Tobias-glad you liked it too as well.

Noden's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:44 PM


The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever readsad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life.



Thank you, so very much for what you just did, my brother:heart:

I loved the poem so much, I wish someone would write like that for me someday, I would cherish him with all my heart, and make love for months on end, and blow his ................mind with everything I've got bottled up inside me, that's how much I loved this poemflowerforyou smokin flowerforyou smokin flowerforyou smokin

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:46 PM
That was so excellent I almost felt not worthy to read it. Excellent write Wolfeyes. :cry:

songstress1's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:52 PM



The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever readsad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life.



Thank you, so very much for what you just did, my brother:heart:

I loved the poem so much, I wish someone would write like that for me someday, I would cherish him with all my heart, and make love for months on end, and blow his ................mind with everything I've got bottled up inside me, that's how much I loved this poemflowerforyou smokin flowerforyou smokin flowerforyou smokin
I know Ali I keep trying to tell him the same thing, guess I am just going to have to show him so he will believe me.devil devil :wink:

Noden's photo
Tue 01/01/08 08:10 PM
Edited by Noden on Tue 01/01/08 08:10 PM




The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever readsad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life.



Thank you, so very much for what you just did, my brother:heart:

I loved the poem so much, I wish someone would write like that for me someday, I would cherish him with all my heart, and make love for months on end, and blow his ................mind with everything I've got bottled up inside me, that's how much I loved this poemflowerforyou smokin flowerforyou smokin flowerforyou smokin
I know Ali I keep trying to tell him the same thing, guess I am just going to have to show him so he will believe me.devil devil :wink:


for sure woman, my god I bet there is many woman whom are lusting after your man right now, not many guys now how to move a woman, but he does!!!!
he's got what it takes, and I don't need to tell you that it's "him", that has to know this....

thecoolyman's photo
Tue 01/01/08 08:38 PM
way 2 go bro, thats from the jokerster Coolydrinker

Noden's photo
Wed 01/02/08 08:59 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou always

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 01/02/08 09:15 AM

way 2 go bro, thats from the jokerster Coolydrinker


Thanks Cooly...Only drink coffee here...ask KC..

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 01/02/08 10:49 AM
Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW:heart: bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 01/02/08 06:41 PM

Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW:heart: bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou

Why thank you Kristi...that warms my heart the way you feel about it...I've been thinking about the story as well that will follow it.

songstress1's photo
Wed 01/02/08 09:29 PM

Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW:heart: bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou
Honey you must get tired of me telling you and yes I am shouting..."I TOLD YOU SO!!!" lol but you know I love you...bigsmile Where the heck is my whip..

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 01/02/08 09:42 PM


Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW:heart: bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou
Honey you must get tired of me telling you and yes I am shouting..."I TOLD YOU SO!!!" lol but you know I love you...bigsmile Where the heck is my whip..

Oh no, I don't ever get tired of hearing it...I just can't believe what I am putting out there and people like it. You are my muse and I love you.

no photo
Thu 01/03/08 03:46 PM
You are the ultimate story teller Wolf...great job.

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