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i really wana hear some truth facts about my profile,,lets go
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If you are going to write in English, it should be English (or American, acceptable in USA and it's satellites).
If English isn't your first language, there are plenty of free online translation s |
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... online translation services. Using one of those will give you the correct spelling of a full word, where capitals belong and possibly even get commas and full stops in the right place.
(Sorry, my fat fingers accidentally touched send Post halfway through.) Seriously, I found your profile almost impossible to understand. It doesn't have to be in perfect English (though with free spelling, free grammar and free translation available: why not?) but it does need to be readable. Best wishes. |
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Ah, poor English, but it makes sense to me. Lot of negativity though. Make it more about what you are looking for and what you have to offer, ie who you are.
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If this is how you're going to present yourself you are better of on a dating site that matches your religion.
Other people want to see a face, a smile, a facial expression. |
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While many profiles have only one picture, more is definitely better.
And, who wrote that profile! It is VERY difficult to read. You need to use plain, and proper English (or, whatever) language. You use many abbreviations which might be unknown to your intended readers. And, sentences need spaces between them. |
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Well, at least you're showing your face now. That's an improvement. A photo with a smile would be even better!
Positive, happy people are attractive! As for the rest, what was said, your spelling. Chat language in a profile is not a good choice. Might be fun for teenage kids, but your an adult and mother. A sane adult man is not going to try and decipher that mumbo-jumbo. A spammer or player might though... Thing being, if you don't take yourself serious and present yourself as a healthy adult woman, you won't attract a great guy either. |
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If not English as a first language,
why so much Americanized text speak and American ghetto attitude in your profile? It looks as though you're putting in way too much effort to appear to have an intellect, far above your own understanding. Maybe, have someone else write out your profile for you. |
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