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Topic: Open My Hand
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Mon 01/02/23 07:38 PM
Open My Hand I reach out grasping for the wind in hopes of capturing just an inkling of hope to hold as tightly as I possibly can so that I could believe the impossible That I could breathe again that the nothingness of the air could be held as tightly as the love that was no longer there I want to be foolish but I know that should I open my hand it will be as empty as my arms that once held her it's just that I need an inkling of hope

AαƚHҽҽɾα Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 4531	Mon 01/02/23 11:46 PM
Beautifully expressed

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 54476	Tue 01/03/23 12:53 AM
The feel of wanting Ray of expectation Penned in aspiration Nice poem

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3502	Tue 01/03/23 03:04 AM
Nice poem .

Unknow Joined Mon 12/26/22 Posts: 55	Tue 01/03/23 08:03 AM
The after effects of love linger on... while those we love move on. Your poem was heartfelt.

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Wed 01/04/23 04:01 AM
As always, beautifully expressed.

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