Topic: Poem i just wrote. Pick a title plz | |
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Hi,
My name is irrelevant I hide behind a mask. oh this pain inside, I know it cant last Ive been through so much, But haven't came all that far Or maybe i have, but in my head its so hard To tell the difference From a life an life sentence. I guess im, just paying a penance From where i was,to where i am, none of us can understand God's plan, But im tryin. I wake up an keep sighing, But instead of crying I look in the mirror, say no more lyin You can do this man. trust in God's plan, your a believer And the grace Jesus died to give you grace, And u have received it, So. Believe it And Yeah this world is so dark, And so are most hearts But if you look to the Lord, Hes the one who wont depart, Maybe Then you can heal. And yeah that pain is real, And yeah you could heal, But we choose not to feel, So find peace and be still. That devil is real, Comes to lie and kill, Destroy and then steal But we can overcome, All that we were, All that weve done. And All that weve been, So let go of your sin, No need to turn back again Keep on pushing forward, Forward ,Onward, and up Towards something, that fills you with love, But dont give up. Its in God we should trust And kniw this. You can reach the end of this race, Keep seeking God's face Until you find your place I know you're hurting, Been deserted. Been told your worthless And none of us deserves that. Or mybe we definitely all do, but all those things you went through, Yea they made you, you . So be proud of yourself But Not to proud to ask for help But still just proud enough To pick up whats left And remember Come December. It's gonna be a new year all the same old fears will repeat, But know this, It dont gotta repeat, you can definitely defeat, All the past versions Of yourself You dont need no one else Except you and Jesus. Believe this!!! |
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Nice versions
The sea within Typical mentions I am what I am Be what I should Grasping out God's will All is well God is to heal ! |
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Hi,
My name is irrelevant I hide behind a mask. oh this pain inside, I know it cant last Ive been through so much, But haven't came all that far Or maybe i have, but in my head its so hard To tell the difference From a life an life sentence. I guess im, just paying a penance From where i was,to where i am, none of us can understand God's plan, But im tryin. I wake up an keep sighing, But instead of crying I look in the mirror, say no more lyin You can do this man. trust in God's plan, your a believer And the grace Jesus died to give you grace, And u have received it, So. Believe it And Yeah this world is so dark, And so are most hearts But if you look to the Lord, Hes the one who wont depart, Maybe Then you can heal. And yeah that pain is real, And yeah you could heal, But we choose not to feel, So find peace and be still. That devil is real, Comes to lie and kill, Destroy and then steal But we can overcome, All that we were, All that weve done. And All that weve been, So let go of your sin, No need to turn back again Keep on pushing forward, Forward ,Onward, and up Towards something, that fills you with love, But dont give up. Its in God we should trust And kniw this. You can reach the end of this race, Keep seeking God's face Until you find your place I know you're hurting, Been deserted. Been told your worthless And none of us deserves that. Or mybe we definitely all do, but all those things you went through, Yea they made you, you . So be proud of yourself But Not to proud to ask for help But still just proud enough To pick up whats left And remember Come December. It's gonna be a new year all the same old fears will repeat, But know this, It dont gotta repeat, you can definitely defeat, All the past versions Of yourself You dont need no one else Except you and Jesus. Believe this!!! NICE |
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Interesting to read while it brought a feel of calmness, Keep writing
As you've mentioned, Believer would be the nice choice. |
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"Beyond The Horizon" |
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Nice poem whatever you decide the title might be .
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Pick a title....
Know the holiness of my love. Your golden finger etched law, then dripped loves nailed blood. Faithful is my friend. |
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Edited by
sonofrangi
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Sun 09/04/22 04:00 AM
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" To Strive in what you believe in..never giving up what you know is right...keep knocking them hurdles down as more will surely come but easier they shall be to jump over....soon they'll just be another challenge...and a challenge you'll accept, conquer and move forward .....for Ladywind
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TITLE.."LIFES' BETTER WITH GOD"
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