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Edited by
Neelam
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Fri 07/22/22 10:17 PM
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I always dream of you,
I feel my dream would come true, I wake up each day, Disappointed and sad, Wishing I could dream on, And never wake up, For my dreams are beautiful, My dreams are about you.. Years have gone by, Yet the emptiness remains, It's a miracle I smile, While the pain is same, I think my life is grey, But it doesn't matter, I don't miss the hues, For my dreams are colourful, My dreams are about you.. I am calm and peaceful, As I wait for my day to end, Looking forward for nightfall, To lie in the comfort of my bed, Silently drifting into dreams, Dreams which are about you, So beautiful, colourful and true, Coz I am so in love with you.. |
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Lovely ❤
So nice to read the way you express  it creates a longing in me to read  Keep writing them 
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1. Spectacular ;I have no other words than saying "Spectacular ", this is the only thing I can Think of it right now . 2. Remarkable : You really have a Talent , I hope you continue to explore your abilities . 3. Beautiful : Thank You for sharing your poem once again . I have no idea that you were capable of writing such things . Last but not the least! Getting praises from Aatheera is like receiving a BIGG Award ... |
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Nice poem
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1. Spectacular ;I have no other words than saying "Spectacular ", this is the only thing I can Think of it right now . 2. Remarkable : You really have a Talent , I hope you continue to explore your abilities . 3. Beautiful : Thank You for sharing your poem once again . I have no idea that you were capable of writing such things . Last but not the least! Getting praises from Aatheera is like receiving a BIGG Award ... Thankyou Paul  I hesitate to comment about anything else here which doesn't sound appropriate before this adorable version from her soul.
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Thank you everyone :-)
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I always dream of you, I feel my dream would come true, I wake up each day, Disappointed and sad, Wishing I could dream on, And never wake up, For my dreams are beautiful, My dreams are about you.. Years have gone by, Yet the emptiness remains, It's a miracle I smile, While the pain is same, I think my life is grey, But it doesn't matter, I don't miss the hues, For my dreams are colourful, My dreams are about you.. I am calm and peaceful, As I wait for my day to end, Looking forward for nightfall, To lie in the comfort of my bed, Silently drifting into dreams, Dreams which are about you, So beautiful, colourful and true, Coz I am so in love with you.. Neelam, this so beautiful! Reading it make feel in love! |
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Neelam, this so beautiful! Reading it make feel in love! Thank you :-) |
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Nice. So intense
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Nice. So intense  Thank you :-) |
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:-) |
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I always dream of you, I feel my dream would come true, I wake up each day, Disappointed and sad, Wishing I could dream on, And never wake up, For my dreams are beautiful, My dreams are about you.. Years have gone by, Yet the emptiness remains, It's a miracle I smile, While the pain is same, I think my life is grey, But it doesn't matter, I don't miss the hues, For my dreams are colourful, My dreams are about you.. I am calm and peaceful, As I wait for my day to end, Looking forward for nightfall, To lie in the comfort of my bed, Silently drifting into dreams, Dreams which are about you, So beautiful, colourful and true, Coz I am so in love with you.. E  XCELLENT
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This Poem is so much and almost Similar to that of poems written by Jasmine, Now don't be surprised ?? Ohh!! Its so easy to Find out .!!! |
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E XCELLENTThank you :-) |
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This Poem is so much and almost Similar to that of poems written by Jasmine, Now don't be surprised ?? Ohh!! Its so easy to Find out .!!! Yeah Jasmine name suited me better lol |
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