Topic: A walk!
Aatheera's photo
Thu 07/14/22 10:53 AM
Come with me for a walk,
Let us start to talk!
Do you see the stars?
We are not alone when they are ours!
What do you like to share?
I would like to listen to all of them, I swear!
Do you hesitate to look at me while you talk?
Guess that is slowing down my steps while I walk!

My eyes are on you even if you feel you are worthless,
I can understand you even if life is a mess!
Continue your talking,
I am holding all my interest in hearing!
Did you stop to make me look at your eyes so close?
I could read your struggles on those!
I admire the courage in them,
the honesty, the way misfortunes were handled, making me see you as a gem!

Do you care to sit for a while?
While I still long to see your adorable smile!
Insecure were you, when you shared the deepest pains,
I'm still beside to protect you when it rains!
Never wish to see a tear when I'm beside,
I realise how much you've gone through and tired!

Let us continue walking again,
But this time, my words shall flow in!
Never I wish to give the loneliness in our days,
For I treasure all the moments to live with you upto the best of my ways!
Our responsibilities, our routines might exceed,
But I will still keep giving my attention to you, never intend if there should be a need!
Somedays I might be near, some nights I had to travel far,
But the beats of my heart can only be for you if you dare to hear!
Listening to your eyes is something I like!
As I often get lost in the depth of honesty that sounds alike!

Do you like me, I'm wondering!
Seeing you smile, will I get a clue if our chemistry is working?
I notice when you look at me when others pass by,
But trust, my interest will be only on you until I die!
I shall not chase nor follow anyone for fun to pass the time,
For I have a responsibility to own you all the time!
Promises do not rely on words,
Be assured to see them through my ways that enfolds!

I see the streets ending,
Should we stop walking to continue the journey of our bonding?
Dramatic ways, I hate to put a scene with a rose and a ring!
Watching your eyes, I wish to listen to it's need to surround me with a secure wing!
Before we say a goodnight,
Tell me if you would like to be near me to hold me always in your sight?
Am I seeing you smile while you hold my hands?
Is it the completeness a day can give with a walk?
Blessed am I to have you,
We will create our days in all the best ways we knew!
We started off with a walk,
To continue this inseparable bonding between us that got unlocked!

- Aatheera (Inspiration from the prompt - "Conversation poem")

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Thu 07/14/22 12:47 PM
S:cherry_blossom:U:cherry_blossom:P:cherry_blossom:E:cherry_blossom:R

JulieABush's photo
Thu 07/14/22 02:09 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Thu 07/14/22 02:51 PM
Beautiful and so moving!
Thanks for sharing this Aatheera!

Aatheera's photo
Fri 07/15/22 02:43 AM
Thank you Robin and Julie :sparkles:

Hello Sparky - Nice to hear from you :blush:
Thank you :rose:

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Fri 07/15/22 07:02 AM

Thank you Robin and Julie :sparkles:

Hello Sparky - Nice to hear from you :blush:
Thank you

Thanks Aatheera!

Merry's photo
Fri 07/15/22 08:19 AM
Articulated in such a beautiful effortless way, lovely Aatheera :hibiscus::sparkles:

Sir's photo
Fri 07/15/22 08:22 AM
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Very nice.

Aatheera's photo
Fri 07/15/22 10:44 AM
Lovely Merry :hugging: Thank you:rose::sparkles:, your words made me happy:blush:

Hi Sir - Happy to hear from you, Thank you :slight_smile:

Dede's photo
Fri 07/29/22 04:37 AM
Sparky sanguine hi

Neelam's photo
Fri 07/29/22 11:47 PM
Beautiful :bouquet: :slight_smile:

Aatheera's photo
Sat 07/30/22 03:00 AM
Beautiful :bouquet: :slight_smile:

Thankyou Lovely! ❤:blush:

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Sat 08/06/22 11:26 AM
I like all the lines

Aatheera's photo
Mon 08/08/22 07:19 AM
I like all the lines

Happy to know, Nag :sparkles:

Sir's photo
Mon 08/08/22 07:57 AM
:bouquet::bouquet:

When do we get to enjoy another walk.

Aatheera's photo
Mon 08/08/22 08:09 AM
:bouquet::bouquet:

When do we get to enjoy another walk.

Aww, that was a wonderful line from you :bouquet::bouquet:
I should not miss these emotions next time to be quoted in male conversational poems..
Expressiveness is always lovely :blush: