Topic: A walk! | |
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Come with me for a walk,
Let us start to talk! Do you see the stars? We are not alone when they are ours! What do you like to share? I would like to listen to all of them, I swear! Do you hesitate to look at me while you talk? Guess that is slowing down my steps while I walk! My eyes are on you even if you feel you are worthless, I can understand you even if life is a mess! Continue your talking, I am holding all my interest in hearing! Did you stop to make me look at your eyes so close? I could read your struggles on those! I admire the courage in them, the honesty, the way misfortunes were handled, making me see you as a gem! Do you care to sit for a while? While I still long to see your adorable smile! Insecure were you, when you shared the deepest pains, I'm still beside to protect you when it rains! Never wish to see a tear when I'm beside, I realise how much you've gone through and tired! Let us continue walking again, But this time, my words shall flow in! Never I wish to give the loneliness in our days, For I treasure all the moments to live with you upto the best of my ways! Our responsibilities, our routines might exceed, But I will still keep giving my attention to you, never intend if there should be a need! Somedays I might be near, some nights I had to travel far, But the beats of my heart can only be for you if you dare to hear! Listening to your eyes is something I like! As I often get lost in the depth of honesty that sounds alike! Do you like me, I'm wondering! Seeing you smile, will I get a clue if our chemistry is working? I notice when you look at me when others pass by, But trust, my interest will be only on you until I die! I shall not chase nor follow anyone for fun to pass the time, For I have a responsibility to own you all the time! Promises do not rely on words, Be assured to see them through my ways that enfolds! I see the streets ending, Should we stop walking to continue the journey of our bonding? Dramatic ways, I hate to put a scene with a rose and a ring! Watching your eyes, I wish to listen to it's need to surround me with a secure wing! Before we say a goodnight, Tell me if you would like to be near me to hold me always in your sight? Am I seeing you smile while you hold my hands? Is it the completeness a day can give with a walk? Blessed am I to have you, We will create our days in all the best ways we knew! We started off with a walk, To continue this inseparable bonding between us that got unlocked! - Aatheera (Inspiration from the prompt - "Conversation poem") |
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Nice poem .
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Beautiful and so moving!
Thanks for sharing this Aatheera! |
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Thank you Robin and Julie
Hello Sparky - Nice to hear from you Thank you |
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Thank you Robin and Julie Hello Sparky - Nice to hear from you Thank you Thanks Aatheera! |
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Articulated in such a beautiful effortless way, lovely Aatheera
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Very nice. |
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Lovely Merry Thank you, your words made me happy
Hi Sir - Happy to hear from you, Thank you |
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Sparky sanguine hi
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Beautiful
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Beautiful Thankyou Lovely! ❤ |
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I like all the lines
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I like all the lines Happy to know, Nag |
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When do we get to enjoy another walk. |
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When do we get to enjoy another walk. Aww, that was a wonderful line from you I should not miss these emotions next time to be quoted in male conversational poems.. Expressiveness is always lovely |
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