Topic: Dreaming
Jasmine's photo
Mon 04/25/22 02:31 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Mon 04/25/22 02:35 PM
I saw not seven,
But thousand colours,
Of rainbow in the sky,
Each beautiful and alive,
As if ready to fly..

I am asleep and dreaming,
Yet I feel sunshine,
Caressing the skin,
Howz that possible,
When I know I am in a dream..

I visit a place faraway,
Where happiness seems to be,
In the air each day,
I see you stretching your hand,
Waiting for me to come your way..

It's a dream and I know,
I am awake in my dream,
Should I open my eyes and,
Come back to reality,
Or stay in my dream,
Where happiness is what,
Everyone feels..

cleve's photo
Mon 04/25/22 05:59 PM

I saw not seven,
But thousand colours,
Of rainbow in the sky,
Each beautiful and alive,
As if ready to fly..

I am asleep and dreaming,
Yet I feel sunshine,
Caressing the skin,
Howz that possible,
When I know I am in a dream..

I visit a place faraway,
Where happiness seems to be,
In the air each day,
I see you stretching your hand,
Waiting for me to come your way..

It's a dream and I know,
I am awake in my dream,
Should I open my eyes and,
Come back to reality,
Or stay in my dream,
Where happiness is what,
Everyone feels..



I LIKE IT..... HAPPINESS IS A

PERSONAL CHOICE WE ALL MAKE................

no photo
Mon 04/25/22 07:32 PM
Very nice

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Tue 04/26/22 12:02 AM
N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E

JulieABush's photo
Tue 04/26/22 03:01 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

no photo
Tue 04/26/22 06:42 AM
Lovely poem.

Jasmine's photo
Tue 04/26/22 02:10 PM
Thank you everyone :-)

Laska Paul 's photo
Tue 04/26/22 10:32 PM


Your poems are almost so much similar to that of Aatheera poems , Good Rhyming , Sweet words , Happy Ending , I really dont know How to praise , Who is better than Who ?? If I say Your poems are Nice then She will be Angry on me and If i say She is better than yours , You will get frustrated , So I will just say Both are equally Good and Nice in writing Poems . Rest Readers choice.

Jasmine's photo
Wed 04/27/22 12:06 AM



Your poems are almost so much similar to that of Aatheera poems , Good Rhyming , Sweet words , Happy Ending , I really dont know How to praise , Who is better than Who ?? If I say Your poems are Nice then She will be Angry on me and If i say She is better than yours , You will get frustrated , So I will just say Both are equally Good and Nice in writing Poems . Rest Readers choice.


There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-)

Aatheera's photo
Wed 04/27/22 12:37 AM
There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-)

Hello Jasmine :blush::rose: your unique way of expressing can't be compared with any one. I always spend time reading your poems n they are my all time favourites ❤ Keep writing them, have a good day :bouquet:

Jasmine's photo
Wed 04/27/22 01:30 PM

There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-)

Hello Jasmine :blush::rose: your unique way of expressing can't be compared with any one. I always spend time reading your poems n they are my all time favourites ❤ Keep writing them, have a good day :bouquet:


Thank you :-)

no photo
Wed 04/27/22 02:52 PM
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Vibes's photo
Wed 04/27/22 07:26 PM
Nice imagination

When the mind is free
Words flow at a spree
Within there is joy
Wants everyone to enjoy
Wonderful in expression
Wishes to continue mission.

ayoub's photo
Mon 05/23/22 02:09 PM
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