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Wed 05/11/22 02:21 AM
Topic: Dreams
Edited by Jasmine on Wed 05/11/22 02:22 AM
Was my old account I posted poems from.
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Tue 05/10/22 10:00 PM
Topic: Dreams
Thank you :slight_smile:
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Wed 04/27/22 01:30 PM
Topic: Dreaming

There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-)

Hello Jasmine :blush::rose: your unique way of expressing can't be compared with any one. I always spend time reading your poems n they are my all time favourites ❤ Keep writing them, have a good day :bouquet:


Thank you :-)
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Wed 04/27/22 12:06 AM
Topic: Dreaming



Your poems are almost so much similar to that of Aatheera poems , Good Rhyming , Sweet words , Happy Ending , I really dont know How to praise , Who is better than Who ?? If I say Your poems are Nice then She will be Angry on me and If i say She is better than yours , You will get frustrated , So I will just say Both are equally Good and Nice in writing Poems . Rest Readers choice.


There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-)
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Tue 04/26/22 02:10 PM
Topic: Dreaming
Thank you everyone :-)
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Mon 04/25/22 02:31 PM
Topic: Dreaming
Edited by Jasmine on Mon 04/25/22 02:35 PM
I saw not seven,
But thousand colours,
Of rainbow in the sky,
Each beautiful and alive,
As if ready to fly..

I am asleep and dreaming,
Yet I feel sunshine,
Caressing the skin,
Howz that possible,
When I know I am in a dream..

I visit a place faraway,
Where happiness seems to be,
In the air each day,
I see you stretching your hand,
Waiting for me to come your way..

It's a dream and I know,
I am awake in my dream,
Should I open my eyes and,
Come back to reality,
Or stay in my dream,
Where happiness is what,
Everyone feels..