Topic: Mired in the Sun's Rain
mig25's photo
Sat 04/09/22 11:01 PM
Mired in the Sun's Rain

I want to be
mired
in the moment
when the sun's passion
slowly awakens the dark
with elegant strokes of light
that paints dawn
the color of everything beautiful

To inhale
and feel
the day's awakening
within the depths of my soul
as if time
was giving the new day
the breath
to reveal night's secrets

And slowly
as time passes
exhale
the heartaches
to the rhythm of the sun's rain
as my thoughts
drown
in the morning dew's glistening brilliance

I want to be
mired
in the freedom
of shadows that no longer fear
the regrets of yesterday
to be the me
that dances
as if the world is watching
and know
that I am
alive





no photo
Sat 04/09/22 11:05 PM
N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E

JulieABush's photo
Sun 04/10/22 12:34 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Merry's photo
Sun 04/10/22 12:54 AM
Bravo! :bouquet::bouquet::rose::rose::bouquet::bouquet::rose::rose:

technovative's photo
Sun 04/17/22 05:33 PM
Another painterly piece written with eloquence, mig.

mig25's photo
Fri 05/06/22 05:46 PM

Another painterly piece written with eloquence, mig.


Appreciate the kind words from someone who I think is a master of the word