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Topic: Be Strong, Oh Warrior!
Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Thu 03/10/22 09:30 PM
I was remembered on the day when you turned gloomier, Gloomier can never be your trait for the wisdom you hold so deeper! Let problems be wild to push you to the ground, Ground can be harder but not sustainable than the pain you underwent for the wound! Let the hopes wither away to make you disappear, Disappear from the thoughts which assumed that you were holding a fear! Let the health fail to make you weaker, Weaker is the fear which gets burnt by the courage you hold in your veins which can make you feel stronger!! Let loneliness surround you closer, Closer will be that person whom you choose to trust and that one will stay loyal with you forever!! Let all your hard efforts fail to throw insults in your path, Path turns as a focussed future when your thoughts are clear without wrath! Let your inner soul know that you are a Warrior so smart and clever, Clever enough to crush all the negative vibes which never hold guts to face you ever! Be Strong, Oh Warrior! Warrior of Courage who can express a unique love for others and still be an admirer! You will always stay respected, Respected in the hearts who value your presence and stay peaceful while all the problems get sorted!! -Aatheera ........................................ I feel grateful for the kindness I get from special hearts here which was the only reason to pick myself up to write this work. Dedicating this to that person who had the trust on me and reached me to share the depressed pain. Dear Anonymous - Blew the dust off and Stay peaceful forever, this piece of courage is for you☺

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Thu 03/10/22 10:30 PM
SUPER

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3502	Fri 03/11/22 12:40 AM
Nice poem .

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 54467	Fri 03/11/22 03:02 AM
Written out of kindness Well it does kinders Wilder are the problem Wisely have to face them Warrior always within Waiting it is certain Wanting is the courage Wall like strength encourage Wails we have manytimes Wisdom holds up everytime! Decoratively dedicated Definitely well vented.

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Fri 03/11/22 05:40 AM
Thankyou

Unknow Joined Sat 03/19/16 Posts: 84	Fri 03/11/22 07:02 PM
Wow... the words Very well arranged Keep Going - May God bless you

jugari007 Joined Sun 02/15/15 Posts: 475	Sat 03/12/22 05:21 AM
Very good.

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Sun 03/13/22 08:53 AM
Thank you

David Michael Joined Wed 01/19/22 Posts: 47	Sun 03/13/22 07:04 PM
it's not fear

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22879	Mon 03/14/22 12:22 AM
Beautifully Scripted Just like a Film.. We all start from"" ZERO "" to become a "HERO"!! You yourself are a Hero of your Life and those who care about you . Therefore , You have to develop a Warrior Mindset and learn to grow from Pain , setbacks , failures , obstacles , challenges , Losses and all the hard times in your Life . One thing I must say The greatest Win is not in never Falling , but in rising every time we Fall.

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Mon 03/14/22 02:53 AM
Beautifully Scripted Just like a Film.. We all start from"" ZERO "" to become a "HERO"!! You yourself are a Hero of your Life and those who care about you . Therefore , You have to develop a Warrior Mindset and learn to grow from Pain , setbacks , failures , obstacles , challenges , Losses and all the hard times in your Life . One thing I must say The greatest Win is not in never Falling , but in rising every time we Fall. True, a fall can be painful but it teaches a lesson not to fall again for that same reason, every fall gives a courage in multiple ways. Thankyou

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Mon 03/14/22 02:57 AM
it's not fear True, was aware that there's no place for fear! That's why I've mentioned the fear as an assumption of the thought(an outside situation can bring) and to make it disappear with the inbuilt courage. Hope it defines the purpose it's been written.