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Topic: YOU & Your Day 😎😇
Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Fri 10/29/21 06:19 AM
Somedays you are more joyful, Keeping yourself playful, More talkative, Extremely expressive, Craving to eat more, A day that will never bore! Somedays you are more lazier, Turning crazier, Wish if someone cooks food to eat, You feel bored even to plan a meet, Wish to stay on bed all day, And charge your health being all your way! Somedays you feel sad, Thinking about past and getting mad, Tears keep reminding, The ones who hurted and never turning, Wish if there's someone beside, Who never judges your side! Somedays you are super active, Challenging and innovative, Interesting to hangout, Sorting all problems coming your way out, Talking more, Sleeping more, Expecting work more! Some days you feel sick and tired, Wishing if care stays beside, Ready to fight, But health keeps you quiet! Each day each way, You make your day, Whatever you are, There are miles to go far, Live the way you want to, And Trust God's love remains promising too! - Aatheera

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Fri 10/29/21 07:21 AM
SUPER Aatheera

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Fri 10/29/21 08:34 AM
Thank you Robin

Unknow Joined Mon 11/16/20 Posts: 38	Fri 10/29/21 10:27 AM
Simply amazing

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3199	Sat 10/30/21 01:13 AM
Nice poem .

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sat 10/30/21 05:41 AM
Simply amazing Thank you

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sat 10/30/21 05:41 AM
Nice poem . Thank you dear ❤

Nick Joined Sun 10/31/21 Posts: 34	Sun 10/31/21 05:31 PM
Nice...I think you have the ability to write a book. So much thought and creative shouldn't be wasted. I'm sure the others in this forum feel the same.

Unknow Joined Mon 11/16/20 Posts: 38	Sun 10/31/21 09:10 PM
I agree with you

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 11/01/21 12:53 AM
Nice...I think you have the ability to write a book. So much thought and creative shouldn't be wasted. I'm sure the others in this forum feel the same. Thank you Nick your words are a real motivation for me, have good times

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 11/01/21 12:54 AM
I agree with you Thank you Nag, happy that you enjoying

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 48781	Mon 11/01/21 04:58 AM
Words flow easier Like that of glacier U feel happier In writing it appear Have find the answer For feeling alone for ever. One more from you. Adorable.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 11/01/21 07:56 AM
Words flow easier Like that of glacier U feel happier In writing it appear Have find the answer For feeling alone for ever. One more from you. Adorable. Nice Peppa

Ramesh Joined Wed 09/15/21 Posts: 3	Thu 11/04/21 12:33 AM
All your poems are simply super… Keep going!!!!

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Thu 11/04/21 12:39 AM
All your poems are simply super… Keep going!!!! Thank you Ramesh

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Thu 11/18/21 02:07 AM
Being presence of YOU with ME, Is so beautiful moment of Life. Feeling like will have to get rebirth, These Life with YOU is not enough. How much I am trying to Know YOU, That much is binding Trust & Truths. Increasing the passion of Heart, In Your simple way of living attitude. As much Loyalty of Love from YOU, I have been received only from YOU, These is what is called Life of Time, Each & Every Moments lived with YOU As much I try to adore YOU That much going depth Insight. The body may die, But Love will stay alive. ..............ARobinA

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3199	Thu 11/18/21 03:07 PM
Nice Robin .

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Thu 11/18/21 11:22 PM
Nice Robin . Thanks JulieABush

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 01/04/22 11:29 PM