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Topic: Finally!!!
Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 12:10 AM
A stone might not glitter, But it is the best for a writer, Who knows how to carve his thoughts better! A flower looks soft for the plucker, But only a bee can reach faster, To get the honey that is tastier! A book serves many purpose, But only a writer can write on its surface, To make it precious! A dessert can be sweeter, But a chef knows how to present it better, To impress the eyes of the eater! YOU may be... Worse for one! Boring for none! Strong for few! Fake for the new! Valuable for some! Pious as a Nun! The "ONE" who knows your spark, Will bring you out from the dark! Will spend time with you alot! To bring out the best from your thought! Realise life is awesome if that "ONE" is there, Or believe that "ONE" is yet to reach you with care, Else face life being strong alone among the rare! But remember YOU are always precious in God's eyes, Even if no one cares for you as time flies! -Aatheera

delightfulillusion Joined Fri 06/24/16 Posts: 119333	Sun 10/24/21 12:13 AM
Beautiful Aatheera. Enjoyed reading it very much

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 12:35 AM
Beautiful Aatheera. Enjoyed reading it very much Thank you Di ❤ Happy that you enjoyed ☺

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3548	Sun 10/24/21 01:08 AM
Nice poem .

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 02:45 AM
Nice poem . Thank you dear ☺

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Sun 10/24/21 03:00 AM
NICE

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 04:35 AM
NICE Thankyou Robin

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 54700	Sun 10/24/21 06:34 AM
Yet another piece from you Good flow of thought Nice .

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 07:15 AM
Yet another piece from you Good flow of thought Nice . Thank you

Rajesh Joined Mon 04/01/19 Posts: 5	Sun 10/24/21 01:50 PM
Good startup Aatheera! keep carving yourself, best wishes

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 02:09 PM
Good startup Aatheera! keep carving yourself, best wishes Thanks a ton

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Sun 10/24/21 02:21 PM
An uplifting delight to read, Aatheera.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 10/24/21 10:39 PM
An uplifting delight to read, Aatheera. Thankyou

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22879	Mon 10/25/21 03:13 AM
A stone might not glitter, But it is the best for a writer, Who knows how to carve his thoughts better! A flower looks soft for the plucker, But only a bee can reach faster, To get the honey that is tastier! A book serves many purpose, But only a writer can write on its surface, To make it precious! A dessert can be sweeter, But a chef knows how to present it better, To impress the eyes of the eater! YOU may be... Worse for one! Boring for none! Strong for few! Fake for the new! Valuable for some! Pious as a Nun! The "ONE" who knows your spark, Will bring you out from the dark! Will spend time with you alot! To bring out the best from your thought! Realise life is awesome if that "ONE" is there, Or believe that "ONE" is yet to reach you with care, Else face life being strong alone among the rare! But remember YOU are always precious in God's eyes, Even if no one cares for you as time flies! -Aatheera OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDD!!Am I eligible to give you a feed back... Here, So Honestly , let me add here . And Yes , One thing I want to say and heartily say that I Like your Poems becoz the Truth is hidden in it , your Mischief is hidden in it, the deepest admiration is hidden in it and sometimes that Extravagant THINGS... I am really Noooooooo one to Judge your Poems , but as a Reader I'll give you 9/10 and 1 ( One ) mark for your Simplicity so total 10/10 on scale . You are the Smiling Queen of Forums .

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 10/25/21 04:26 AM
OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDD!!Am I eligible to give you a feed back... Here, So Honestly , let me add here . And Yes , One thing I want to say and heartily say that I Like your Poems becoz the Truth is hidden in it , your Mischief is hidden in it, the deepest admiration is hidden in it and sometimes that Extravagant THINGS... I am really Noooooooo one to Judge your Poems , but as a Reader I'll give you 9/10 and 1 ( One ) mark for your Simplicity so total 10/10 on scale . You are the Smiling Queen of Forums . Thankyou

Apple of Your EYES Joined Mon 03/15/21 Posts: 5477	Mon 10/25/21 04:39 AM
A stone might not glitter, But it is the best for a writer, Who knows how to carve his thoughts better! A flower looks soft for the plucker, But only a bee can reach faster, To get the honey that is tastier! A book serves many purpose, But only a writer can write on its surface, To make it precious! A dessert can be sweeter, But a chef knows how to present it better, To impress the eyes of the eater! YOU may be... Worse for one! Boring for none! Strong for few! Fake for the new! Valuable for some! Pious as a Nun! The "ONE" who knows your spark, Will bring you out from the dark! Will spend time with you alot! To bring out the best from your thought! Realise life is awesome if that "ONE" is there, Or believe that "ONE" is yet to reach you with care, Else face life being strong alone among the rare! But remember YOU are always precious in God's eyes, Even if no one cares for you as time flies! -Aatheera as always,my heart leaps and touched with every words u put into this poem...Love it Aathera....more,more,more.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 10/25/21 05:42 AM
as always,my heart leaps and touched with every words u put into this poem...Love it Aathera....more,more,more. Thankyou my daffodil ☺ happy for you ❤

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Mon 10/25/21 01:23 PM
LOVE Every things going normal. Suddenly a breeze of love springs, Each moments an days got changed.. To do or Do Not was lots tine going like that. Sometimes muttering alone, Sometimes giggles to her.. wasn't these I or was i this Never could have understand. Finally Gave my heart to her an took her with me. Still it's not a Deal.. Sometimes trying to break it but heart says you can't do it. It's not a weak thread that will easily break like a iron shield 🖤 Finally YOU know its not a deal or give an take... It's LOVE Finally.............Robin Is It

Campbell Joined Mon 10/25/21 Posts: 3	Mon 10/25/21 01:29 PM
A stone might not glitter, But it is the best for a writer, Who knows how to carve his thoughts better! A flower looks soft for the plucker, But only a bee can reach faster, To get the honey that is tastier! A book serves many purpose, But only a writer can write on its surface, To make it precious! A dessert can be sweeter, But a chef knows how to present it better, To impress the eyes of the eater! YOU may be... Worse for one! Boring for none! Strong for few! Fake for the new! Valuable for some! Pious as a Nun! The "ONE" who knows your spark, Will bring you out from the dark! Will spend time with you alot! To bring out the best from your thought! Realise life is awesome if that "ONE" is there, Or believe that "ONE" is yet to reach you with care, Else face life being strong alone among the rare! But remember YOU are always precious in God's eyes, Even if no one cares for you as time flies! -Aatheera nice poem

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 10/25/21 11:42 PM
LOVE Every things going normal. Suddenly a breeze of love springs, Each moments an days got changed.. To do or Do Not was lots tine going like that. Sometimes muttering alone, Sometimes giggles to her.. wasn't these I or was i this Never could have understand. Finally Gave my heart to her an took her with me. Still it's not a Deal.. Sometimes trying to break it but heart says you can't do it. It's not a weak thread that will easily break like a iron shield  Finally YOU know its not a deal or give an take... It's LOVE Finally.............Robin Is It Realising how much a "Finally" could hold within as always, it was interesting Robin