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Topic: Grateitude
technovative's photo
Tue 10/19/21 06:57 PM
I'm grateful
to separate from
grating attitudes.
Shred me a plate full
of cheesy platitudes.
Oblige the abolition
of abominable certitude.
Backfill and ditch war
with the entrenched.
No longer flinch before
tossing a wrench
into the unworkable.
Grant myself the fortitude,
to disallow sullen brood,
from seeping in
and souring my mood.
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Tue 10/19/21 08:07 PM

I'm grateful
to separate from
grating attitudes.
Shred me a plate full
of cheesy platitudes.
Oblige the abolition
of abominable certitude.
Backfill and ditch war
with the entrenched.
No longer flinch before
tossing a wrench
into the unworkable.
Grant myself the fortitude,
to disallow sullen brood,
from seeping in
and souring my mood.


Palpable :grinning:
technovative's photo
Tue 10/19/21 08:33 PM


I'm grateful
to separate from
grating attitudes.
Shred me a plate full
of cheesy platitudes.
Oblige the abolition
of abominable certitude.
Backfill and ditch war
with the entrenched.
No longer flinch before
tossing a wrench
into the unworkable.
Grant myself the fortitude,
to disallow sullen brood,
from seeping in
and souring my mood.


Palpable :grinning:


happy
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Wed 10/20/21 12:03 AM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:
JulieABush's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:56 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
velbar's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:06 PM
I'm grateful
to separate from
grating attitudes.
Shred me a plate full
of cheesy platitudes.
Oblige the abolition
of abominable certitude.
Backfill and ditch war
with the entrenched.
No longer flinch before
tossing a wrench
into the unworkable.
Grant myself the fortitude,
to disallow sullen brood,
from seeping in
and souring my mood.

I like end rhyme :slight_smile:
Aatheera's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:42 PM
Nice, the balance of the tone which holds each line is amazing.. loved reading it :thumbsup:
technovative's photo
Wed 10/20/21 02:23 PM

N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:


Thank you, Robin.
technovative's photo
Wed 10/20/21 02:24 PM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thank you, Julie.
technovative's photo
Wed 10/20/21 02:29 PM

I like end rhyme :slight_smile:


Yeah, it kinda sums up the intent. Thanks, Velbar.
technovative's photo
Wed 10/20/21 06:27 PM

Nice, the balance of the tone which holds each line is amazing.. loved reading it :thumbsup:


Aatheera, Thank you for giving it a read and sharing your thoughts.

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