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Topic: Grateitude
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Tue 10/19/21 06:57 PM
I'm grateful to separate from grating attitudes. Shred me a plate full of cheesy platitudes. Oblige the abolition of abominable certitude. Backfill and ditch war with the entrenched. No longer flinch before tossing a wrench into the unworkable. Grant myself the fortitude, to disallow sullen brood, from seeping in and souring my mood.

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2930	Tue 10/19/21 08:07 PM
I'm grateful to separate from grating attitudes. Shred me a plate full of cheesy platitudes. Oblige the abolition of abominable certitude. Backfill and ditch war with the entrenched. No longer flinch before tossing a wrench into the unworkable. Grant myself the fortitude, to disallow sullen brood, from seeping in and souring my mood. Palpable

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Tue 10/19/21 08:33 PM
I'm grateful to separate from grating attitudes. Shred me a plate full of cheesy platitudes. Oblige the abolition of abominable certitude. Backfill and ditch war with the entrenched. No longer flinch before tossing a wrench into the unworkable. Grant myself the fortitude, to disallow sullen brood, from seeping in and souring my mood. Palpable

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54283	Wed 10/20/21 12:03 AM
NICE

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3189	Wed 10/20/21 12:56 AM
Nice poem .

velbar Joined Sun 10/17/21 Posts: 13	Wed 10/20/21 12:06 PM
I'm grateful to separate from grating attitudes. Shred me a plate full of cheesy platitudes. Oblige the abolition of abominable certitude. Backfill and ditch war with the entrenched. No longer flinch before tossing a wrench into the unworkable. Grant myself the fortitude, to disallow sullen brood, from seeping in and souring my mood. I like end rhyme

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Wed 10/20/21 12:42 PM
Nice, the balance of the tone which holds each line is amazing.. loved reading it

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/20/21 02:23 PM
NICE Thank you, Robin.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/20/21 02:24 PM
Nice poem . Thank you, Julie.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/20/21 02:29 PM
I like end rhyme Yeah, it kinda sums up the intent. Thanks, Velbar.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2629	Wed 10/20/21 06:27 PM
Nice, the balance of the tone which holds each line is amazing.. loved reading it Aatheera, Thank you for giving it a read and sharing your thoughts.

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