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Topic: Heal and be in peace!
Apple of Your EYES Joined Mon 03/15/21 Posts: 5477	Sat 10/16/21 01:33 PM
when you are broken, and left forsaken, suffer, wither, struggle and cry, until your eyes become dry, days will be painful, nights more tearful, a day will come! to reap the pains for some! your heart will be healed, with care well sealed! your thoughts will be renewed, with peace well secured! For God knows you are worth, understanding you since birth! Remain in peace dear, for God is there to hear! ---Aatheera I love this AAtheera,seriously an encouragement for me too personally.

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 54333	Sun 10/17/21 12:44 AM
It is sure God will hear Let the day be near To fly out higher Good poem

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Thu 10/21/21 11:45 PM
I love this AAtheera,seriously an encouragement for me too personally. Hello Apple ☺ Hope your doing good.. your words brought a spark of inner happiness in me ❤ love you too daffodil

Apple of Your EYES Joined Mon 03/15/21 Posts: 5477	Fri 10/22/21 12:00 AM
Hello Apple ☺ Hope your doing good.. your words brought a spark of inner happiness in me ❤ love you too daffodil Hi Aatheera...Compile your work,it will bring u Miles.I do appreciate you guys of poetic thots create such meaningful words.Kip composing pretty one..be present here often your poems are tested,received and applauded in here...love u too.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Fri 10/22/21 12:15 AM
Hi Aatheera...Compile your work,it will bring u Miles.I do appreciate you guys of poetic thots create such meaningful words.Kip composing pretty one..be present here often your poems are tested,received and applauded in here...love u too. thanks for that motivation Apple ☺ I'm just a learner here n i keep learning a lot from all the experts here, most important is, I enjoy reading the poems being written here which gives a lot of peace.. definitely I'm here, all around

Rajesh Joined Mon 04/01/19 Posts: 5	Sat 10/23/21 11:26 AM
Good one

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sat 10/23/21 11:34 AM
Good one Thank you

Rajesh Joined Mon 04/01/19 Posts: 5	Sat 10/23/21 11:40 AM
Wow! That's the spirit

Unknow Joined Mon 11/16/20 Posts: 38	Tue 11/02/21 10:36 AM
Your poetry is relevant to many and can reach to a layman like me also

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Thu 11/04/21 02:07 PM
Your poetry is relevant to many and can reach to a layman like me also Thank you,

Ninio Joined Thu 11/04/21 Posts: 1	Thu 11/04/21 02:46 PM
that's feeling!! coming from heart

Nick Joined Sun 10/31/21 Posts: 34	Sat 11/06/21 02:45 PM Edited by Nick on Sat 11/06/21 02:49 PM
I enjoy reading your poetry. Your poetry stays with me,so much so that I find myself remembering some of the lines without effort.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Sun 11/07/21 10:31 PM
Thank you Ninio and Nick Exactly Nick, I too hold that way of remembering few lines in the poetries which I adored n it tends to linger when such situations pass thru in life

Unknow Joined Thu 07/07/16 Posts: 8	Sun 11/07/21 11:05 PM
when you are broken, and left forsaken, suffer, wither, struggle and cry, until your eyes become dry, days will be painful, nights more tearful, a day will come! to reap the pains for some! your heart will be healed, with care well sealed! your thoughts will be renewed, with peace well secured! For God knows you are worth, understanding you since birth! Remain in peace dear, for God is there to hear! ---Aatheera deep. love the choice of words. words of sheer experience am sure.

Aatheera Joined Wed 10/06/21 Posts: 356	Mon 11/08/21 01:56 AM
deep. love the choice of words. words of sheer experience am sure. Thank you Arvind, continue writing your versions too n have good times

Kishan Joined Fri 09/22/17 Posts: 2	Wed 12/22/21 01:11 AM
How Ru doing?