Topic: YOU HEY YES YOU!
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Sun 06/13/21 11:03 PM
Please Rate My Profile, and be Absolutely Honest (I Can take criticism). I m not very good at sugarcoating or boasting myself. how do I get my intention of hooking up across without pushing people away? appreciate the feedback Bless Up!

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Sun 06/13/21 11:47 PM
Typical Laziness. Nothing about who or what you are looking for except Abbreviations. Nothing about yourself or Hobbies or Interests. No Filters Set on who can or can not contact you (like it matters here). But at least you are Smiling and showing your Face and Not Hiding it behind a Mask or other BS way ( against Site rules to do so).

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Mon 06/14/21 11:13 AM
Take it easy.... You gotta write about yourself, like the way you'd introduce yourself to strangers... I won't comment on what you are looking for and the abbreviated parts are pretty indicative, best of luck

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Mon 06/14/21 02:17 PM
At least you have a picture ... as shabby as you look in it !!!
And a profile to match.....
Needs working on .....look at other profiles and see if you can come up with something more in keeping with the site you are on ....

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Mon 06/14/21 08:06 PM
Think about HER subconscious mind: Refrain from using a negative, i.e. no, not, __n't in your screen name.

Think about the subtleties of your pic: Do you think a girl wants a dude that has a small spacecraft launching from atop his head???

Consider the socioeconomic aspects of your attire: Wear your best color dress shirt with button down collar.

Refrain from OVER broadcasting your desire NOT to commit: A single mention of fleeting encounter is sufficient. We have a couple generations of kids, unwed, living in their parents' basements. Lack of capacity to commit is presumed these days.

Lastly, surely there is something INTERESTING about yourself which you can put in your profile.....Tell them you are a descendant of the Author of the Kama Sutra, OR that you are Gandhi's illegitimate grandchild.....SOMETHING that makes a girl go "Whoa" of "Wow"!

OR...YOU could jump in and APPLAUD for the MAJORITY of the Girls here, like, "Scam Not, Want Not!"


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Tue 06/15/21 01:18 AM
good

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Tue 06/15/21 04:03 AM
Edited by jaish on Tue 06/15/21 04:16 AM
A young athletic East Indian working in Ontario as Operations Manager, with money to spend on night life

I doubt if there are great many profiles to beat this combo.

As far as pictures go, one in daylight would help.

But the tone in this post's title sounds aggressive. (May be girls like that(?))


Think about HER subconscious mind: Refrain from using a negative, i.e. no, not, __n't in your screen name.

Think about the subtleties of your pic: Do you think a girl wants a dude that has a small spacecraft launching from atop his head???

Consider the socioeconomic aspects of your attire: Wear your best color dress shirt with button down collar.

Refrain from OVER broadcasting your desire NOT to commit: A single mention of fleeting encounter is sufficient. We have a couple generations of kids, unwed, living in their parents' basements. Lack of capacity to commit is presumed these days.

Lastly, surely there is something INTERESTING about yourself which you can put in your profile.....Tell them you are a descendant of the Author of the Kama Sutra, OR that you are Gandhi's illegitimate grandchild.....SOMETHING that makes a girl go "Whoa" of "Wow"!

OR...YOU could jump in and APPLAUD for the MAJORITY of the Girls here, like, "Scam Not, Want Not!"






Some good points but your decadent humor on Gandhi ...,

also implies reference to downstream apostles of non violence like ...

Dr. Martin Luther King

or, Nelson Mandela,

Tolstoy,

or, for that matter,

God's only son

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Wed 06/16/21 01:53 AM
SWH: Thanks ya I got u. but does anyone really read all the bio info tho?

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Wed 06/16/21 01:57 AM
thanks everyone for taking the time to comment. several good points which (when I get the time) I will make changes accordingly.

LadiesfFirst: Very detailed, but LOL that Disney World's Magic Mountain, not a spacecraft