Topic: Angel of Moonlight
Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 07:24 PM
Angel of the Moonlight

There she sat in moonlight
An angel of the mists
Held so close in darkness
Her heart she felt unkissed.
Bathing in the starlight
With tear adorning cheeks
She sat alone in silence
And thought a prayer of peace.
A lover she was waiting
He hasn't come along
It never really mattered
If he was really strong.
She'd know if she should see him
She'd know his heart so well
If only that he'd come along
Her loving heart would swell.
She envisioned dancing
Among the stars so high
And almost felt him touch her
As if to draw her nigh.
So there she sits in moonlight
With tear adorning cheeks
Waiting for her lover
With a heart so mild and meek.

Fadedspirit 12/26/2007

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 12/26/07 07:27 PM
That was really good Faded...I felt the flow in there and it had good verse to it.

no photo
Wed 12/26/07 07:32 PM
Great work

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 07:35 PM
Thanks Wolfeyes and Blackfox.

sassyma's photo
Wed 12/26/07 07:39 PM
that was nice good job

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 09:30 PM
Thank you sassyma. :smile:

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 12/26/07 09:37 PM
Wow, that was great faded!! :smile:

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 09:55 PM
Thanks much blonderockermom. :smile:

sealove42's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:01 PM
Hit the mood tonight faded spirit. Read nicely

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:15 PM
Thanks sealove. They come and go just like the wind.

trustingfate's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:29 PM
Your work is quite beautiful...flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 11:24 PM
Thanks:smile:

TiffaIrishGirl's photo
Wed 12/26/07 11:26 PM
awww beautiful dear...called to meflowerforyou :heart:

songstress1's photo
Thu 12/27/07 07:19 AM
lovely just lovelyflowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 12/27/07 07:55 AM
awwww very nicebigsmile

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 12/27/07 06:32 PM
Thanks y'all. Good thing I'm not a snowman cause i'd be in puddles right now.......lol