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Angel of the Moonlight
There she sat in moonlight An angel of the mists Held so close in darkness Her heart she felt unkissed. Bathing in the starlight With tear adorning cheeks She sat alone in silence And thought a prayer of peace. A lover she was waiting He hasn't come along It never really mattered If he was really strong. She'd know if she should see him She'd know his heart so well If only that he'd come along Her loving heart would swell. She envisioned dancing Among the stars so high And almost felt him touch her As if to draw her nigh. So there she sits in moonlight With tear adorning cheeks Waiting for her lover With a heart so mild and meek. Fadedspirit 12/26/2007 |
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That was really good Faded...I felt the flow in there and it had good verse to it.
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Great work
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Thanks Wolfeyes and Blackfox.
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that was nice good job
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Thank you sassyma.
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Wow, that was great faded!!
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Thanks much blonderockermom.
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Hit the mood tonight faded spirit. Read nicely
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Thanks sealove. They come and go just like the wind.
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Your work is quite beautiful...
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Thanks
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awww beautiful dear...called to me
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lovely just lovely
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awwww very nice
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Thanks y'all. Good thing I'm not a snowman cause i'd be in puddles right now.......lol
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