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Topic: Purge
Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Thu 01/14/21 06:24 AM Edited by Unknow on Thu 01/14/21 06:26 AM
I purged seven years in two years. Toxic tears dripping heaven and hell. Even the salt wept, remembering history. To turn and look back is to become statuesque. Such madness! Because the daughters still conceived in the drunkenness of Lot. It gives me pause to ponder logic and justice.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3582	Thu 01/14/21 01:24 PM
Nice poem .

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22879	Thu 01/14/21 04:30 PM
Everyone knows you are Gorgeous but only Few People Knows you are so much Interesting and Smart !Out of 20 I give you 18 for this Poem !

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Thu 01/14/21 05:50 PM Edited by technovative on Thu 01/14/21 05:51 PM
I appreciate the impact of the biblical metaphor you used here, Notlooking.

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Thu 01/14/21 08:00 PM
I appreciate the impact of the biblical metaphor you used here, Notlooking. You noticed? 🤭🤫

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Thu 01/14/21 08:01 PM
Everyone knows you are Gorgeous but only Few People Knows you are so much Interesting and Smart !Out of 20 I give you 18 for this Poem ! Flattery will get you everywhere...Thank you LP.

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