Topic: The Discarded
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Fri 12/04/20 11:04 AM
I’ve been wait for her,
It seems my whole life.
She talks of one day
Becoming my wife
She does seem so perfect
It happened so fast
Finally it’s here
A love that will last.

Her mood seems to change
With each coming night
When we used to make love
DAMN IT! She’s starting a fight
They capture your eyes,
Your heart, your attention.
That’s when you are sold,
But they forgot to mention.

They want you they need you
Without you they’ll die
And swear it’s the truth
As they look in your eyes
They might even muster
A fake tear to cry
But believe in THE END
It All was a LIE
Starts with a flame
Ends with a spark
I’m sorry to say
I fell in love with a NARC.

Lance Kirby 9/11/20

JulieABush's photo
Fri 12/04/20 01:42 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Sean's photo
Wed 12/09/20 12:28 AM
I liked it too

Roxy's photo
Wed 12/09/20 05:12 AM
A good writing there..very deep..

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Thu 12/17/20 03:57 AM

I’ve been wait for her,
It seems my whole life.
She talks of one day
Becoming my wife
She does seem so perfect
It happened so fast
Finally it’s here
A love that will last.

Her mood seems to change
With each coming night
When we used to make love
DAMN IT! She’s starting a fight
They capture your eyes,
Your heart, your attention.
That’s when you are sold,
But they forgot to mention.

They want you they need you
Without you they’ll die
And swear it’s the truth
As they look in your eyes
They might even muster
A fake tear to cry
But believe in THE END
It All was a LIE
Starts with a flame
Ends with a spark
I’m sorry to say
I fell in love with a NARC.

Lance Kirby 9/11/20


Nice rhyming
Narc, spark.
:thumbsup: