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Topic: is it my soul leaving me
opensoul Joined Sun 10/18/20 Posts: 31	Mon 10/26/20 04:24 AM
do I understand you trying to understand me our picnic in the cement meadow now turned to irony now the iron melting yet cooling smothering in our impatience yet you say it in words that sound like music running as high as the sun baby baby even the wings of yesterday cannot hold your memories and wheres love not true love but real love yet sorrow scrolls with time imperfection or is it dishonesty or is it my soul leaving me

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3442	Mon 10/26/20 02:25 PM
Nice poem .

LarchTree Joined Fri 11/22/19 Posts: 935	Mon 10/26/20 03:58 PM
Very enjoyable poem.

LarchTree Joined Fri 11/22/19 Posts: 935	Mon 10/26/20 03:59 PM


opensoul Joined Sun 10/18/20 Posts: 31	Mon 10/26/20 04:16 PM
Thank you.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3442	Tue 10/27/20 03:45 AM
Liked yours too LS .

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