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Topic: letting you go by Feallan Angele
Feallan Angele Joined Thu 08/27/20 Posts: 3	Thu 09/10/20 08:53 AM
There's sympathy deep within my heart At first I barely don't know how and where to start There's a throbbing pain deep within my heart As if I was aimed and shoot by a dart There are times that I can't sleep at night An inevitable pain and sadness I cannot fight There's no happiness in me that I can sight I'm hoping to see the remedy through the light I know I know that love is quite intricate I'm seeking for answers that were accurate I'm floundered , this feeling should eradicate Why on earth there are doubts and questions that I can't state? I looked up in that starless firmament Sitting in the corner where people can't pass by All I can do is to silently cry Realizing and remembering stuffs that I once relied It's hard It's hard for me to set you free It's hard It's hard to forget you easily Our story was written in the past Yet my love for you cannot surpass It's hard to eliminate the moments we shared It's hard to exterminate the memories we treasured For once Can you please do me a favor? A time will do Can you give me time, a li'l time with you? Time that might ease all these pain Time that made me insane Can we dance in the midst of the rain? Can we kiss between the endless song with a sweet refrain? Can we act like we love each other just like before? Can we do all those stuffs we did afore? Can we bring back that past we buried long ago? Can we do all of these before letting you go? I'll no longer hold you Yes I'll set you free Our love may fade as well us our memories I can still remember you whenever I see your initials carved in this tree But It won't change the fact that you're no longer mine No longer with me

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3609	Fri 09/11/20 12:55 AM
Nice poem .

Feallan Angele Joined Thu 08/27/20 Posts: 3	Sat 09/12/20 12:46 AM
thank you

VintageMXer Joined Thu 09/03/20 Posts: 1	Sat 09/12/20 08:57 PM
jesus. in time the pain will diminish. have faith dear.

Feallan Angele Joined Thu 08/27/20 Posts: 3	Mon 09/14/20 07:57 PM
it's now totally diminished

evalyn endriga Joined Wed 09/16/20 Posts: 14	Wed 09/16/20 05:49 PM
Awesome choice of words.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Tue 10/05/21 09:40 PM
Quite moving!

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 10/06/21 02:30 AM
NICE Thieir is one of mine With same of pain, She never strain, Even in rain.. dedicated to her Hope Who is she, she knows Blessing of Waves

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 10/06/21 06:24 AM
There's sympathy deep within my heart At first I barely don't know how and where to start There's a throbbing pain deep within my heart As if I was aimed and shoot by a dart There are times that I can't sleep at night An inevitable pain and sadness I cannot fight There's no happiness in me that I can sight I'm hoping to see the remedy through the light I know I know that love is quite intricate I'm seeking for answers that were accurate I'm floundered , this feeling should eradicate Why on earth there are doubts and questions that I can't state? I looked up in that starless firmament Sitting in the corner where people can't pass by All I can do is to silently cry Realizing and remembering stuffs that I once relied It's hard It's hard for me to set you free It's hard It's hard to forget you easily Our story was written in the past Yet my love for you cannot surpass It's hard to eliminate the moments we shared It's hard to exterminate the memories we treasured For once Can you please do me a favor? A time will do Can you give me time, a li'l time with you? Time that might ease all these pain Time that made me insane Can we dance in the midst of the rain? Can we kiss between the endless song with a sweet refrain? Can we act like we love each other just like before? Can we do all those stuffs we did afore? Can we bring back that past we buried long ago? Can we do all of these before letting you go? I'll no longer hold you Yes I'll set you free Our love may fade as well us our memories I can still remember you whenever I see your initials carved in this tree But It won't change the fact that you're no longer mine No longer with me could feel the emotion behind each line well written

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 10/06/21 06:24 AM
NICE Thieir is one of mine With same of pain, She never strain, Even in rain.. dedicated to her Hope Who is she, she knows Blessing of Waves nice

McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Wed 10/06/21 06:25 AM
Awesome poem! Happy the pain is fading!!