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In dreams I'm drowning
I can't swim, losing my breath In her eyes deep pools. Drifting in dark seas, I see her brightly lit smile Lighting up the night. Peace found for awhile, A soft wind, with her slight touch All storms fade away. I do not need much, Her kisses feed my hunger, Her juice sates my thirst. Let me go under, Leave me to drown in my sleep If she is my sea. |
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Fri 05/08/20 07:07 AM
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She sounds lovely.
good read. |
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Thank u.. But it's about no one particular and yet about every woman and yet only the one special one..u know what I mean... How could u?I don't even know. Lol
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Fri 05/08/20 08:10 AM
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Thank u.. But it's about no one particular and yet about every woman and yet only the one special one..u know what I mean... How could u?I don't even know. Lol ah yes The Perfect one...in your minds eye...The forbidden One The One that brings your mind to a climax I know what you mean...I used to have one.... Have a blessed day and be safe till I read you again. |
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Nice poem .
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