there is less
than
i can see

two am
two IMs
flutter across my dreams

there isnt much to know about me save
that i dont really know what i am here for any particular
purpose

there isnt much to know about me save
ill save you from this.

and i dont
think
you get my point

and i dont know if ive got it goin' on
and i dont really care if this shrugs sickness
to see you there,
well
i cant surmount the mountains of
scans and faxes
land of fascists

lets fight a war, babe
lets shun the silly little
serendipitous sodomy

of living life

tonight-
im all alone here.

i never minded it till i couldnt
place my finger on the

contour you left on my bedsheets.

the ring in the air full of wanderin'
low notes, strummed in a key i am

all
too unfamiliar with

so!
what is it
that i want to
say

that maybe i like it.

yeah, maybe, baby,
i like it
just.
this.
way.

its unlike i am alone here now
but its just like i can
never remember the

fire that birthed me

the circumstances that pulled me into this
maelstrom of thought and un-thought

i find a reason for every little mistake
and i still cant find a season for the little litmus
that reads a certain shade of grey

i find myself scrounging
for the meaning stuck in the couch cushions.

i find myself clawing
at the love wrapped in red tape.

Good write once more...

interesting piece

thanks :D

Not a traditional use of the stanzaic form, which is probably why I find this piece interesting.

Was good to read this.

thanks wilga. i rarely write things in standard meter, for that very reason. :D

LAMom as always <3

Awwww that is just you a bit unusual but that is what catches our eyes and make us want to read more. Just keep up the good work love it. For some reason it reminds me the way Humphy Bogart talked guess that is what really catches my eye. He did have his on Style but one that was remembered for many many years.

humphrey bogart!? wow, talk about flattery. casablanca is one of the finest things to ever touch a screen.

excellent writing. I actually went back to find something that you had written, I like your style THAT much. keep it up.

thank you very much. :D

Of course you know your good, nice read...

thanks.