Topic: Mental Muck
technovative's photo
Sun 02/23/20 03:32 AM
Lulled by night's assuaging stillness,
engorged neurons deluge,
clogging the gullies of my mind.

Strafed the pearlescent flask,
that hangs in the black,
until it leaked like a sieve
pouring light on my task.

Trudging hip-wader deep
in thick mental muck,
panning for glimmers of cogent thoughts.

Excavated some rocks
from the folds in my lobes,
found promising flecks,
though none proved to be gold.

Horizons approach on this nocturnal arc
dams the deluge flow
and shifts my brain into park.

JulieABush's photo
Sun 02/23/20 04:13 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Sun 02/23/20 08:00 AM
C'est super.?

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Sun 02/23/20 10:14 AM
excellent

Ladywind7's photo
Sun 02/23/20 10:23 AM
I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me.:rose::eight_pointed_black_star:

technovative's photo
Sun 02/23/20 11:17 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thanks, Julie.

technovative's photo
Sun 02/23/20 11:18 AM

C'est super.?


Merci, Claudine.

technovative's photo
Sun 02/23/20 11:19 AM

excellent


Thanks, DM.

technovative's photo
Sun 02/23/20 11:27 AM

I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me.:rose::eight_pointed_black_star:



Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind.

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 02/24/20 01:17 AM


I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me.:rose::eight_pointed_black_star:



Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind.


Perhaps people do understand, but fail to comment. I post my poetry also at a place where you would fit in easily, poetry is appreciated and you can dialogue with other like minded people.
www.allpoetry.com
Have a look....

technovative's photo
Mon 02/24/20 12:41 PM
Edited by technovative on Mon 02/24/20 12:43 PM



I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me.:rose::eight_pointed_black_star:



Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind.


Perhaps people do understand, but fail to comment. I post my poetry also at a place where you would fit in easily, poetry is appreciated and you can dialogue with other like minded people.
www.allpoetry.com
Have a look....


I appreciate the suggestion. I've been an allpoetry member for a few years.
http://allpoetry.com/John_Gallant

I also share here: http://hellopoetry.com/john-gallant/

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 02/24/20 04:27 PM




I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me.:rose::eight_pointed_black_star:



Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind.


Perhaps people do understand, but fail to comment. I post my poetry also at a place where you would fit in easily, poetry is appreciated and you can dialogue with other like minded people.
www.allpoetry.com
Have a look....


I appreciate the suggestion. I've been an allpoetry member for a few years.
http://allpoetry.com/John_Gallant

I also share here: http://hellopoetry.com/john-gallant/


Ha, ha. I am Ladywind there of course....