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Lulled by night's assuaging stillness,
engorged neurons deluge, clogging the gullies of my mind. Strafed the pearlescent flask, that hangs in the black, until it leaked like a sieve pouring light on my task. Trudging hip-wader deep in thick mental muck, panning for glimmers of cogent thoughts. Excavated some rocks from the folds in my lobes, found promising flecks, though none proved to be gold. Horizons approach on this nocturnal arc dams the deluge flow and shifts my brain into park. |
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Nice poem .
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C'est super.?
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excellent
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I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me.
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Nice poem . Thanks, Julie. |
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C'est super.? Merci, Claudine. |
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excellent Thanks, DM. |
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I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me. Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind. |
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I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me. Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind. Perhaps people do understand, but fail to comment. I post my poetry also at a place where you would fit in easily, poetry is appreciated and you can dialogue with other like minded people. www.allpoetry.com Have a look.... |
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Edited by
technovative
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Mon 02/24/20 12:43 PM
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I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me. Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind. Perhaps people do understand, but fail to comment. I post my poetry also at a place where you would fit in easily, poetry is appreciated and you can dialogue with other like minded people. www.allpoetry.com Have a look.... I appreciate the suggestion. I've been an allpoetry member for a few years. http://allpoetry.com/John_Gallant I also share here: http://hellopoetry.com/john-gallant/ |
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I don't have words to express what your poem meant to me. Yeah... it's become very apparent to me that my expressions don't connect with many people. Thanks for acknowledging what I share, Ladywind. Perhaps people do understand, but fail to comment. I post my poetry also at a place where you would fit in easily, poetry is appreciated and you can dialogue with other like minded people. www.allpoetry.com Have a look.... I appreciate the suggestion. I've been an allpoetry member for a few years. http://allpoetry.com/John_Gallant I also share here: http://hellopoetry.com/john-gallant/ Ha, ha. I am Ladywind there of course.... |
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