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Topic: The River
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 02/14/20 02:59 PM
The River The river often times rushes through the course of life carrying a rage that only heartache could know And then there are those times when the river is still as if it were pondering what it was that it was chasing The river sustains life quenches thirst and leads the way of the lost yet most times it's taken for granted The river the woman the mother the wife the backbone of the beautiful life called love

Unknow Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 101536	Fri 02/14/20 03:02 PM
Very nice, I love it mig

catinidaho Joined Fri 10/24/14 Posts: 10849	Fri 02/14/20 03:09 PM
I wonder why, River. lol Good poem, mig.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 02/14/20 03:44 PM
Very nice, I love it mig Thank you!!!!!

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 02/14/20 03:45 PM
I wonder why, River. lol Good poem, mig. Hmmm, you know catinidaho I'm not sure why . . . and thanks

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3439	Sat 02/15/20 04:00 AM
Nice poem .

Mutha Brah Joined Sat 02/15/20 Posts: 6	Sat 02/15/20 12:53 PM
I like that one. Had to reread it to fully get what you are trying to get across

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 02/16/20 01:39 AM
And it shall flow, if the flow is right. I appreciate every word my friend. My husband was in awe of your poetry, as am I.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2643	Sun 02/16/20 08:30 PM
Effective use of an apt metaphor in this uplifting well-composed poem, mig.

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Tue 02/18/20 03:40 PM
I feel the heartbeat in this one, Mig. Thank you for sharing.

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