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Topic: My Ellipse
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 01/03/20 02:11 AM Edited by Ladywind7 on Fri 01/03/20 02:12 AM
Your light is so bright, I have had to go beyond the ellipse of you, for less. Futile wanderings. Only with you am I fertile, bearing gifts and golden fruit. I have proudly stood, crawled, fallen to my knees to accept your sphere of perfection.

Seamus Joined Mon 07/15/19 Posts: 3365	Fri 01/03/20 08:32 AM
Great poem.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 01/03/20 12:13 PM
Great poem. Thank you Seamus. I wrote it just now for a competition. It was brevity 30-50 words. I will probably expand it soon

Queenie Joined Thu 04/26/18 Posts: 16001	Fri 01/03/20 12:13 PM
Nice

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 01/03/20 12:17 PM
Nice Thank you. Forever trying....

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3302	Sat 01/04/20 03:56 AM
Nice poem .

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 01/04/20 12:17 PM
Nice poem . Thank you

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2637	Sat 01/04/20 03:05 PM
Conveys a sense of devotion to the divine.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 01/05/20 12:50 AM
Conveys a sense of devotion to the divine. You got it!!

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Thu 01/09/20 03:53 PM
Love the raw vulnerability of this poem.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 01/10/20 12:51 PM
Love the raw vulnerability of this poem. Thank you.

VirgoRedZone Joined Sun 01/05/20 Posts: 5	Sat 01/11/20 10:27 PM
I love the strength displayed by the surrender, the power of coexistence by need and dependability

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Wed 01/15/20 04:22 AM
I love the strength displayed by the surrender, the power of coexistence by need and dependability Thank you, poetries interpretation is different for all. I appreciate your comment

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