Topic: The usual for this forum: Rate My Profile
Ron B's photo
Sun 11/24/19 12:44 PM
I would appreciate any feedback and suggestions on my profile. I have put a fair amount of effort into it but am confident others will find ways to improve it.

Freebird Deluxe's photo
Sun 11/24/19 01:08 PM
Far too much sex talk ,

no photo
Sun 11/24/19 03:32 PM
I agree with Freebird.

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Sun 11/24/19 03:45 PM
Too much negative stuff like IF YOU ARE XYZ BLABLA.
Capitals is rude.
And all the 'do nots' are very off-putting
You can easily rephrase that in a more positive way and still make clear what you do -and thus don't- want.

Get a photo with a smile if you can. No point in a lot of photos when you look grumpy in all of them.


Ron B's photo
Mon 11/25/19 03:42 AM
Edited by Ron B on Mon 11/25/19 03:56 AM
I didn't realize I look grumpy. Thanks for letting me know.
I'll get some different pics.

Ron B's photo
Mon 11/25/19 03:55 AM
Edited by Ron B on Mon 11/25/19 03:57 AM
Thanks!
I edited out much of the sexual. Let me know if it is still excessive.

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/25/19 04:20 AM
Edited by SparklingCrystal 💖💎 on Mon 11/25/19 04:21 AM
What you got and what I'd make of it:

I am interested in a FWB/Dating situation, possibly even polyamory. I feel attracted to strong intelligent women.
I do have some ED problems, but don't worry, I am resourceful.

*I am in an open marriage so if you are looking for marriage I'm the wrong guy for you*

Interested and in my area? I would love to hear from you!

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You can still work on this if you like, but now all the negatives and redundant stuff has gone.
Oh, and by all means get better photos or remove most. Get at least one with a (genuine) smile, even a hint of a smile would be okay.

Ron B's photo
Mon 11/25/19 07:14 AM
Thanks Sparkling Crystal. I loved your suggested edit. I will work on the pictures.

Ron B's photo
Mon 11/25/19 11:34 AM
I don't photograph well, but here goes.

delightfulillusion's photo
Mon 11/25/19 11:36 AM
Much improved profile pic!

no photo
Mon 11/25/19 11:39 AM
🥳🥳🥳

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/25/19 11:45 AM

Thanks Sparkling Crystal. I loved your suggested edit. I will work on the pictures.

You're very welcome!
Great improvement, I like this photo! flowerforyou

Freebird Deluxe's photo
Mon 11/25/19 01:25 PM

Thanks!
I edited out much of the sexual. Let me know if it is still excessive.

It still looks to me that is all you are interested in

Rock's photo
Mon 11/25/19 02:01 PM
Based on the content of your profile,
everything you're looking for, can be
found on 2nd Street in Odessa.

Best of luck



SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/25/19 02:07 PM


Thanks!
I edited out much of the sexual. Let me know if it is still excessive.

It still looks to me that is all you are interested in

For someone who's looking for a woman outside of his relationship for FWB, not another love relationship as he doesn't want to leave his wife, what's wrong with that? It's honest and clear what he's looking for and I don't feel it's excessive.
Also great he has the guts to be open upfront about ED issues, which I'd like to know for sure if I was going for a guy for FWB. It would create very uncomfortable moments if it first became clear in the moment supreme.

Freebird Deluxe's photo
Mon 11/25/19 02:22 PM
I suppose he will be judged by the uptake of his offer ,or get his wishes dashed by failure

Ron B's photo
Tue 11/26/19 01:15 PM
Thanks, Sparkling Crystal for coming to my defense.
I was reluctant to reply directly to certain critics for fear of seeming combative.
Again thanks for that and all your helpful suggestions.