Topic: The usual for this forum: Rate My Profile | |
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I would appreciate any feedback and suggestions on my profile. I have put a fair amount of effort into it but am confident others will find ways to improve it.
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Far too much sex talk ,
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I agree with Freebird.
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Too much negative stuff like IF YOU ARE XYZ BLABLA.
Capitals is rude. And all the 'do nots' are very off-putting You can easily rephrase that in a more positive way and still make clear what you do -and thus don't- want. Get a photo with a smile if you can. No point in a lot of photos when you look grumpy in all of them. |
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Edited by
Ron B
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Mon 11/25/19 03:56 AM
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I didn't realize I look grumpy. Thanks for letting me know.
I'll get some different pics. |
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Edited by
Ron B
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Mon 11/25/19 03:57 AM
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Thanks!
I edited out much of the sexual. Let me know if it is still excessive. |
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Edited by
SparklingCrystal 💖💎
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Mon 11/25/19 04:21 AM
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What you got and what I'd make of it:
I am interested in a FWB/Dating situation, possibly even polyamory. I feel attracted to strong intelligent women. I do have some ED problems, but don't worry, I am resourceful. *I am in an open marriage so if you are looking for marriage I'm the wrong guy for you* Interested and in my area? I would love to hear from you! ------------------ You can still work on this if you like, but now all the negatives and redundant stuff has gone. Oh, and by all means get better photos or remove most. Get at least one with a (genuine) smile, even a hint of a smile would be okay. |
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Thanks Sparkling Crystal. I loved your suggested edit. I will work on the pictures.
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I don't photograph well, but here goes.
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Much improved profile pic!
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🥳🥳🥳
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Thanks Sparkling Crystal. I loved your suggested edit. I will work on the pictures. You're very welcome! Great improvement, I like this photo! |
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Thanks! I edited out much of the sexual. Let me know if it is still excessive. It still looks to me that is all you are interested in |
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Based on the content of your profile,
everything you're looking for, can be found on 2nd Street in Odessa. Best of luck |
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Thanks! I edited out much of the sexual. Let me know if it is still excessive. It still looks to me that is all you are interested in For someone who's looking for a woman outside of his relationship for FWB, not another love relationship as he doesn't want to leave his wife, what's wrong with that? It's honest and clear what he's looking for and I don't feel it's excessive. Also great he has the guts to be open upfront about ED issues, which I'd like to know for sure if I was going for a guy for FWB. It would create very uncomfortable moments if it first became clear in the moment supreme. |
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I suppose he will be judged by the uptake of his offer ,or get his wishes dashed by failure
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Thanks, Sparkling Crystal for coming to my defense.
I was reluctant to reply directly to certain critics for fear of seeming combative. Again thanks for that and all your helpful suggestions. |
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