Topic: The Stranger
Final Dreamz's photo
Wed 07/31/19 02:03 AM
I am a stranger an innocent man and I am guilty of loving you. To take your hand is to know you every word you say makes me love you more because without your words I just want to kiss your lips ever so softly that who I am simply melts into you strangest days and night writing away useless love letters to some women who are cloudy minded and do not understand who I am is regardless hurt and negated reflected upon as crazy while brilliant and my own shadow follows me my past covers me whole and while I sing still as night who I become is to know you to right you and to protect you never knowing your name or your face or your voice you are a ghost that I have seen a thousand times are you even real or are you hiding as another woman I already know and this woman loves me and I have felt she hurt me as such said given strong willed crazy lovely man that I stand and I sit and ponder today's feelings typing away needlessly at a computer today's modern pen for poets and likewise authors the greatest books can be made for free on Kindle and who we are is simply the best and worst in time... You make me feel as thought every second of eternity with you Is precious and our lost time loving other people has made me feeling like I lost your touch... To feel it again is to open my heart once more an open door letting me know you're safe and you're mind again or likewise I'm about to make all your dreams come true...

JulieABush's photo
Wed 07/31/19 03:38 AM
Beautiful Final Dreamz:wink: :thumbsup: .

Final Dreamz's photo
Wed 07/31/19 04:08 AM
Ty Julie :)

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Wed 07/31/19 04:18 AM
Beautiful... your words are breath taking Final Dreamz flowerforyou

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Wed 07/31/19 05:05 AM
Beautiful as always

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 07/31/19 06:31 AM
There is nothing more beautiful then to see a man that has such a beautiful way with words..


Words written from the heart touches more souls then can be imagined..:thumbsup:

Final Dreamz's photo
Wed 07/31/19 10:53 AM

There is nothing more beautiful then to see a man that has such a beautiful way with words..


Words written from the heart touches more souls then can be imagined..:thumbsup:


And I am also dumb as any man yet still open to listen to the wiseness of a woman's knowledge listening to George Carlin say that Women are crazy while men are stupid and women are only crazy cause men are stupid... :P

Final Dreamz's photo
Wed 07/31/19 10:56 AM
To everyone this is a talent that is dying and likewise for love to exist is to keep up this ideal that a Casanova type of man exists and while he pleased 1000 women I only want to please one woman 1000 nights....

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Wed 07/31/19 11:02 AM


There is nothing more beautiful then to see a man that has such a beautiful way with words..


Words written from the heart touches more souls then can be imagined..:thumbsup:


And I am also dumb as any man yet still open to listen to the wiseness of a woman's knowledge listening to George Carlin say that Women are crazy while men are stupid and women are only crazy cause men are stupid... :P


Lol women/men that are crazy/stupid are just crazy/stupid all on their own...

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Wed 07/31/19 12:03 PM
I dont understand anything you wrote. Lots of run on sentences. Sorry wish i new more. Got reading disabilities

Final Dreamz's photo
Wed 07/31/19 01:11 PM

I dont understand anything you wrote. Lots of run on sentences. Sorry wish i new more. Got reading disabilities


A poet exists for many purposes sometimes are not grammatically correct. This attracts even deeper people all of us waste time in life doing what we love those of us who work, which I wish was everyone but to each their own we all struggled at one point...
keep doing what they love even when they hate it been made fun of for it... maybe even to say o'well I am who I am? Not everyone understands me a lot of people I really can't say I blame them either but I am still human as they are...

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Sat 08/10/19 04:41 PM
Edited by Kisssomethingpink on Sat 08/10/19 04:53 PM
Keep doing you whether people understand you or your style . This is not an English class and you are not getting graded on what you wrote.It is purely for our enjoyment( and I did) That does not make anything wrong with what you wrote, or how you wrote it or what you continue to write. Coffee is not for everyone some of us like tea.drinker I am a writer( professionally I do not expect everyone to enjoy my style of writing.)


Keep on writing H:wink: Handsome.

Final Dreamz's photo
Sat 08/17/19 01:57 AM

Keep doing you whether people understand you or your style . This is not an English class and you are not getting graded on what you wrote.It is purely for our enjoyment( and I did) That does not make anything wrong with what you wrote, or how you wrote it or what you continue to write. Coffee is not for everyone some of us like tea.drinker I am a writer( professionally I do not expect everyone to enjoy my style of writing.)


Keep on writing H:wink: Handsome.


Being a writer myself I thank you for your words... ;) I wasn't offended because everyone has their say... I believe truly that nobody is wrong and nobody is right... 2 plus 2 does not equal 4 just the way our brains turned it into "fact" My biggest fan like you yourself is simply... ourselves. I'm not famous yet but I've been finding a lot of support through the world of authors using this group on a platform (against regulations of website to mention) there is apparently a really big name is films on such site and I have yet to meet him or her.

Alucard1904's photo
Wed 08/21/19 05:30 PM
Dope! Please write more please? what got you into poetry? I want to learn how to write? who are your favorite authors? thanks

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Wed 08/21/19 05:33 PM


There is nothing more beautiful then to see a man that has such a beautiful way with words..


Words written from the heart touches more souls then can be imagined..:thumbsup:


And I am also dumb as any man yet still open to listen to the wiseness of a woman's knowledge listening to George Carlin say that Women are crazy while men are stupid and women are only crazy cause men are stupid... :P
No man/woman is your enemy! No man/woman is your friend! Every human is your teacher!

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Fri 08/23/19 10:13 PM
I dont understand anything you wrote. Lots of run on sentences. Sorry wish i new more. Got reading disabilities


poetry and art challenges you to see things in a new way. and art isn't always something to understand.

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Mon 09/02/19 05:39 PM



There is nothing more beautiful then to see a man that has such a beautiful way with words..


Words written from the heart touches more souls then can be imagined..:thumbsup:


And I am also dumb as any man yet still open to listen to the wiseness of a woman's knowledge listening to George Carlin say that Women are crazy while men are stupid and women are only crazy cause men are stupid... :P
No man/woman is your enemy! No man/woman is your friend! Every human is your teacher!


My friend, that is all you need to know... You have the gift... your heart is always your next lesson teach yourself because there's not a damn thing I can teach you otherwise. Your talent only gets deeper as the wrinkles on your arse, a poet once told me... keep grinding them out. :)