Topic: The Robin
Freebird Deluxe's photo
Fri 06/21/19 01:55 PM
As I awoke this morning
When all sweet things are born
A robin perched upon my sill
To signal the coming morn
He was fragile young proud and gay
And softly did he sing
Thoughts of happiness and joy
Into my heart did ring
I smiled gently at his song
Then paused beside my bed
I quickly closed the window
And banged him on the head

James's photo
Fri 06/21/19 03:25 PM
The morning sun was rising
it's orange hue aglow
casting rays of birth and hope
in lieu of night times flow
I hopped and bounced from sill to sill
with innocence and glee
I sought to spread but happiness
and sang a song or three
Suddenly the light was gone
the stars were out again
but this time moving 'round my head
oh god, ouch, the pain


Bastet127's photo
Fri 06/21/19 05:54 PM
It all about perspectives :joy: good job guys, although unexpected I bet for OP.

no photo
Fri 06/21/19 06:15 PM
Oh gosh you guys lol very well done

mzrosie's photo
Fri 06/21/19 06:51 PM
oh Freebird and James, both unexpected ending... Bravo!!!!



flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Freebird Deluxe's photo
Fri 06/21/19 11:03 PM
Let's make it a Trilogy ! Get your writing trousers on :wink:

Bastet127's photo
Sat 06/22/19 12:42 AM
I’ve got the same old view
day after day
And at night, I see the stars.
Sometimes I get dirty
Sometimes, squeaky clean
But, I bet you’ll see right through me.
Every now and then
I find a friend
who lands upon my sill
But, today, I was a pane.
(sorry little guy).




Freebird Deluxe's photo
Sun 06/23/19 01:13 PM
Edited by Freebird Deluxe on Sun 06/23/19 01:14 PM
Forgive forget what's done is done
Although my head is throbbing
Oh wait I see a shiny car
Thought the little Robin

He didn't like my pretty song
It's gleaming now But not for long
I'll fly around a little bit
And splatter it with ship ship ship