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Topic: confluence
s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 12/10/07 04:57 PM
two streams meet and dissolve each other and they are one with the sea and the sky fearsome they carve the grand canyon and harbor the reef they power the cyclones and shelter all manner of mysteries still they are at the mercy of gravity falling together forever - it is weightlessness so, be carefree!

Jess642 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 22732	Mon 12/10/07 04:59 PM


s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 12/10/07 04:59 PM


JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Mon 12/10/07 05:00 PM
very nice.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 12/10/07 05:00 PM
(singing) "Free falling..."

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76392	Mon 12/10/07 05:02 PM
Ohhh hell ya loved it s1owhand

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Mon 12/10/07 05:50 PM
Beautifully written.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 12/10/07 08:36 PM
ohhhhh

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 12/10/07 10:16 PM
ohhhhhhhhhhh heavenly

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 12/11/07 09:37 AM
very nice indeed

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Tue 12/11/07 10:03 AM
And I become a single drop of water in this stream that was once two but now one and drift along and create the universal truth..beauty

Unsane Joined Thu 11/29/07 Posts: 168	Tue 12/11/07 10:43 AM
very nice!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 12/11/07 12:43 PM
great writing

Jamie82 Joined Tue 05/08/07 Posts: 14951	Tue 12/11/07 12:48 PM

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