An angel he calls me
But does he know I tripped over a star
Falling slowly through time
Crashing down upon the earth
Looking up in surprise at my demise

I fell from the heavens or was I cast out
Cast out more likely
Because it was not my time
So I wander about here and there
Seeking something so very rare

An angel I think not
Just a gurl who has danced with angels
Flown among the stars
Storing moonbeams in mason jars
Just a gurl with damaged wings

An angel I think not
Just a gurl whose voice trembles when she sings
Traveled back in time and dined with Kings
Captured the rays of pure sunlight and held them in my hands
Just a gurl whose halo is lost

An angel I think not
Just a gurl who has paid the cost
Pranced with the wildest horses across the plains
Slept upon the clouds so soft
Just a gurl whose harp is out of tune

Just a gurl nothing more nothing less
Just a gurl who refuses to wear a dress
Just a gurl who was born too late and lived much too soon
Just a gurl who is most likely crazy as a loon
An angel I think not

I beg to differ, cause in your poems I see an angel in your heart

Thats beautiful...we are all Angels, just because some of us wear dusty and ruffled wings, we are still angels all the same

your my dark angel,, get it right,,, oooooooooooooooooom yall

beautiful sis..


the feelings of a Fallin Angel

An Angel with many faces of life,, the beauty your soul has seen and the beauty your soul so shares,, the beauty of your soul so shines the light upon my heart and soul

An Angel, I think Yessssssssssssssssssss

We are all within an Angel indeed just at times that Angel sits in the shadows as she mends her wings in order to fly once again.

Glad to see you back...
Your an angel in discuise... you just don't know it yet!

Thanks you everyone but really I'm no angel, just gurl

just gurl is perfect

CCP...I have missed you and your words That was beautiful....thanks for sharing!

it is really good to see you here again...

not "just" a gurl...

I told you so You should listen to me more often because in this instance the consensus is far from pretentious. The people have spoke ANGEL YE BE!

"looking up in surprise at my demise"

great great great line.

"just a gurl whose voice trembles when she sings"

mine too! except for the girl part.

great write. very smooth. good ending.

you're more than "just" a gurl Jenni


you're mah jellohead badgurl!

a true friend, you rawk Jenni *hugs*

Ok ok I changed my headline..I got it now
I'm An Angel..Brwnkimba says so..who am I to argue with him..besides the others have spoken as well

I mean