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Topic: AMERICAN POET FINALS
Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 07:01 PM
Here, on this stage, two are left standing after three days
of intense competition. Two artists will be cheered on
by their fellow poets and one will be left standing.
That one will be Just Say Hi's first AMERICAN POET.

Your American Poet Judges
Jimi366, Ontario, Clare2112

It has come down to two poets and a thread.
Best of luck to-
GREENEYEDLADY42 AND JUSTDIFFERENT

THE AMERICAN POET FINALISTS
The stage is now yours!

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 07:50 PM
The first American Poet will be named sometime around
9:30pm on Thursday.

greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 11/15/06 07:56 PM
*Distant Relatives*

Its sad to say but sometimes
Families just don’t get along-
You’ve got a hardheaded brother
With opinions way too strong.

Or maybe your dad smacked you
‘Til you were black n blue
And just being around old Uncle Joe
Is too difficult to get thru.

Everybody’s been there-
There’s one in every clan
Some big mouth in the family
Thinking he’s become a man.

Or busy body Ethels’ house
Where all the ladies meet
On Wednesday night for coffee
Commenting on a neighbors defeat.

You gotta love em to a point-
Cause you know that they are kin
But you don’t have to like
All the trouble they get in

That’s why I am not so close
In proximity where I live
To any of my family
--I like Distant relatives!


Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 08:03 PM
I live those words you write. I have the kind of
family that is scattered to the four winds-
FOR A REASON!!!
I had prayed to God to reunite me with my family last year.
He granted that prayer. I learned to be careful what you
pray for.

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/15/06 08:04 PM
Distant Relatives
sweeeeeeet,,,cute poem,and fun read!

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 11/15/06 08:06 PM
I wonder if thats why I moved all the way up the coast? HHHmmm I'll
think about that.

greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 11/15/06 08:12 PM
Yeah that kinda hit me really good about an hour ago. My brother was
just pretty snaughty to me today and I thought man he better be glad he
lives so far away cuz Id go kick his ass!!LOL
Im still his BIG sister ;)

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 11/15/06 08:13 PM
Inspiration at its best

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 08:26 PM
My family is about as close to cannibals as you can get.
We don't mix very well.

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/15/06 09:02 PM
bump

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 01:53 AM
The Old Man Nov. 15, 2006

There was an old man who worked all his life,
He did every thing that he could-
An odd job here and a favor there
He did lots of things nobody would;

He’d help the old ladies in his neighborhood
And mow some lawns or haul trash.-
Most of his time he spent looking
For things to do tho’ no one had asked

He lived his life as best he could,
Treating others decent and kind;
Though the rumors flew about him-
He ignored them and he didn’t mind.

But one day alas the man died,
A simple man in a simple grave.
But the town bought him a stone=
To mark the place where he lay.

No one really knew him, other than by his deeds
No words at his funeral were said-
A simple stone that some one picked out,
And very simply it read…

“Here Lies everybody’s friend
He did everything he could do…
But it was his time to go home-
For even God needs helpers too”

trying_to_fly's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:11 AM
"Taken In":

I Was Taken In, By Your Beauty And Finesse
I Hoped We Would Click By Our Similar Ticks, One Would Guess
The Talks We Had, The Laughs and Smiles We Shared
One Would Think We Had Distinct Eyes.....And At Each Other We Stared
The Heavy Conversation To The Point Of No End
We Figure There Isn’t Quite Enough Time For Us To Spend
Thinking Of Each Other Day In And Out
Wondering If The Time Was Wasted, Wondering What Thoughts Were About

I Was Taken In And Thought Things Were Great
I Didn’t Know It Would Come Down To A Debate
When I Saw You Changed Your Will And Still You Lesson You Conversation
Day By Day
You Tell Me Words That Hurt Inside And My Heart Feels Decay
You May Think The Words Are Right But Try To Hide It All
I Was Taken In.....And My Entire Being Was Led To The Fall......

trying_to_fly's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:27 AM
OOOPPPSSS!!! Ummmm.....this is my first time ever writing a poem and I
don't think, for some reason, I was allowed to post a poem on here. I
do appologize for it. I'm sorry....

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 06:47 AM
dude! not here!
now shush and go sit down to read yer emails...shhhhh!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 06:48 AM
*Grass Hoppers*

no photo
Thu 11/16/06 06:52 AM
Those were really GOOD! Greeneyed!!!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 07:14 AM
yes good rhymes,,,full of love and tears,and more love...

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 07:50 AM
TYVM..
Im bursting at the seams LOL!

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 07:52 AM
got pics???

no photo
Thu 11/16/06 07:54 AM
Well be careful!!!! It might hurt your typing fingers?LOL

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