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Topic: AMERICAN POET FINALS
greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 01:48 PM
What do I know?

If you walked away right now
It wouldn’t hurt too much-
I wouldn’t miss your smile
Or the gentle way you touch.
Should you decide to leave
I wont lose any sleep-
There are no obligations…
No promises to keep;

But what do I know?
Have I lost my mind?
The kind of love I feel for you
Is so hard to find-
I Thinking I could go thru life
Just being your friend.
That it wouldn’t hurt my heart,
And I could just pretend-

But what do I know?

Whenever you’re around
A light floods my soul
You’re the missing piece
That lets me know I’m whole
And there is no other place
That I would rather be
All that I know right now
Is this love that flows thru me.

What do I know?
Have I lost my mind
This kind of love
Is so hard to find
I guess I could lie
Say I don’t care
I could walk away
But that’s so unfair!

What do I know?



greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:01 PM
Salute to a soldier…

Soldier far away from home
In the desert hauling his gear
All grown up - yet still a boy…

Stakes out to guard against
The enemy so near
His weapons no longer a toy.

Jittery at every sound
He tries hard to keep his nerve,
Dodging mines with his team.

Wishing he could block out
Every sound of the war he serves,
But they carry on in his dreams.

He carries every letter
His mom and girlfriend send
His only lifeline outside this place

He thinks about family gatherings
That he can’t attend
The stress of this war on his face

So we salute the soldiers
Who do this everyday
So that we can live free

We may not always agree
On the price that is paid
But they have only respect from me.


For my son Joshua USAF



greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:08 PM
I Feel His Breath

Sometimes Im at the end of my rope,
Life is so hard and I’ve reached for hope-
And Im feeling restless weary and worn.
But Jesus knows my every need
And He supplies it, yes indeed
And thru His grace again I am reborn!

I feel His Breath-I hear His voice
I see His footsteps beside mine in the dew.
I fear no Death- For I rejoice,
In this day that He has given fresh and new

I feel His breath…

I can feel His breath on my face,
I feel His very presence in this place
Im fresh and new and ready for anything.
Nothing formed against me will stand
For I am in the palm of His hand,
And I have Vict’ry only He can bring.

I feel his breath- I hear His voice
I see His footsteps beside mine in the dew.
I fear no death, for I rejoice
In this day that He has given fresh and new

I feel His breath…

And like the sea billows roll
He brings refreshment to my soul
For God is good
No Harm can come to me…..

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:18 PM
I think you have submitted enough poems... please do not
submitt...anymore...thank you...!

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:19 PM
Customer service-

Snotty lady on the end of the line,
Taking her bad day out on me.
You can hear it in the tone of her voice
Is there somewhere else she could be?

Please press one, please press two
Rarely seem to get a real person.
As the holiday season draws near
The problem only seems to worsen.

What's your account # what's your name
When was the date of your purchase?
I wish that someone would give a class
On how to give good customer service.

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:21 PM
Ontario Dont get me started I just posted a nice poem about Jesus LOL

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 02:25 PM
I asked that you stop posting over and hour ago...!

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 03:33 PM
Okay...Miss, Greeny....the customer service statement...is this meant to
be an actual complaint...rather then a poem...?

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 03:43 PM
Yes dude...I enjoyed metamorphosis...I put me right to sleep...!

iceprincess's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:15 PM
ontario be nice her poems are really pretty and she's earned it.

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:17 PM
Look...what on earth is so bad about this comment...?

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:26 PM
opinionated judge?

iceprincess's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:28 PM
I'm sorry baby just ignore me. I'll ignore your meaness in telling them
to stop writing.Their good and I like reading their works. Oh hell leave
em alone hon.

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:33 PM
Okay...the writers have displayed more then enough poems needed
to make a decision...if you wish to continue...fine...?

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:34 PM
Princess,,,
I think he's trying to say the contest is over?

Maliciousmac's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:36 PM
So hard to choose a favorite... but you know I think Gladiators was
excellent....
Great job!

Ontario's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:36 PM
No...the 2 writers may continue writing until 9:00 eastern time
if they really, feel its necessary...!

iceprincess's photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:42 PM
thank you I figured If I whined enough you'd give me my way.LOL

Gryphyn's photo
Thu 11/16/06 06:01 PM
Excellent job to both of you. I enjoyed them all.
G

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/16/06 06:20 PM
I liked Gladiators too. Really good stuff.
I am happy whatever happens -It just been great writing with you
all.Like I said before there is alot of talent on this site
And I have met some wonderful people here.

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