Topic: Ravaging Each Other
iamjrs47's photo
Thu 12/06/07 06:00 AM
Ravaging Each Other


I sigh with anticipation of your touch.
Magic fingertips, silky creamy lips.
Make my body your playground, from head to toe.
Taste me with a deep and yearning hunger.

The memory of your breath.
Exhale as you journey down my back.
Exhilarating, feeling your tongue dance,
Hot breath on tiny wet tracks.
Let me feel your passion.

I linger as I inhale your scent.
Your body over mine, that steamy tender place.
Give me all of you, no holding back.
Spread yourself apart, you’ve commandeered my heart.
Let me drown in your passion as I flood you with mine.

My passions rise as our tongues explore .
A fair exchange of sweet bliss.
We share the passions we feel, the intensity.
Ravage me, ravaging you, us ravaging each other
So right, so perfect, so complete.

no photo
Thu 12/06/07 06:11 AM
Ooooo very nice flowerforyou

openheart45's photo
Thu 12/06/07 06:35 AM
very nice indeed..flowerforyou

songstress1's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:02 AM
OH MY!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:05 AM
Songtress, I take it that's not a lions, tigers, and bears moment?

laugh Sorry couldn't resist. Again, iam, hmmmm, yup!

Italy0219's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:05 AM
Yes, Yes, Yes!

songstress1's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:24 AM

Songtress, I take it that's not a lions, tigers, and bears moment?

laugh Sorry couldn't resist. Again, iam, hmmmm, yup!
lol lmao was thinking something goofy to say back but was laughin too hard and I just cannot think of anything better than what you just said..laugh

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:48 AM
Sssssshhh turn on the fans in here is it hot in here or
is it me devil smokin devil whewwwwwbigsmile

Good onebigsmile

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:56 AM
This is a womans poet...that is very very vivid and well written...welcome to the site...

no photo
Thu 12/06/07 09:10 AM
WOW blushing laugh

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/06/07 09:12 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Myyyyyyyy,,, blushing flowerforyou

iamjrs47's photo
Fri 12/07/07 11:58 AM
Thank you for all your wonderful comments,,,passion is a wonderful thing

pkh's photo
Fri 12/07/07 01:03 PM
It is getting warm in here very nice write again