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When times were looking up
And happy smiles were easier to come by Our world was shattered by a death So hard to bear How do you tell a little boy About a god of love and mercy That would take his mommy And leave him all alone Please god help me understand Some things are always for the better But it ain’t me I’m really All concerned about Help Little Randy understand And help him Someday Be a big man For the mother he has got to live without. Oh daddy daddy Please tell mommy to come home I miss her so Son I can’t tell mommy nothing Anymore, Our father up in heaven Took her home where she should be But daddy, I thought she wanted To be here with me. |
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Very good poetry... |
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Thank you MsTeddy ,, I wrote that soon after my wife was killed in a car wreck in 1999. She left me with a 3 year old son.
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Darlin how touching. tears in my eyes. Eaier for us as adults to understand death. A child's innocence shattered.
You and Randy have all my love |
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Very touching indeed. The innocence of a child is hard to bear with their grief. I'm putting this in a kind way, maybe she found Laci for you to take up your heart, so that you won't be lonely anymore. I hope the two of you the best of luck, friendship, and peace in your lives. All three of you.
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there are some things in life
we look for always we see them - there out of reach we hear them - quietly telling a story we have their scent - lingering on our sheets we taste their - sadness in our tears we feel them - deep inside where there are no words |
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at a loss, you should write more tommy
very touching |
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at a loss, you should write more tommy very touching Thanks Jack, I've written a few more like this, but I've never shared the others with anyone. |
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Very touching indeed. The innocence of a child is hard to bear with their grief. I'm putting this in a kind way, maybe she found Laci for you to take up your heart, so that you won't be lonely anymore. I hope the two of you the best of luck, friendship, and peace in your lives. All three of you. Thank you Wolf, I've read some of yours and , I don't come close to your style of writing, Excellent. Laci and I are both taking new paths in our lives and I believe we will be taking that path together. |
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It's so sad and beautifully written........
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Heartfelt & beautiful ..
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Tugs at my heartstrings...
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Ohhhh my that just dropped my heart Tommy
very good write that went straight to my heart and grabbed my soul. You really should write more. |
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so touching about a very personal loss.
glad you found someone to bring a smile to your face |
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simple and poignant. I really liked it... it's so hard to tell kids about death... Theres a short story called "Waterbugs and Dragonflies" that helped me in a time of loss, and I think you may appreciate it to. I wish you much luck in your future.
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