Topic: Wondering souls
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Mon 12/03/07 09:10 PM
Wondering souls

souls wondering lonely each and everyday
lonely and broken just making their way
then by chance two souls happen to meet
thru space and time is no easy feat
all the stars must have been just right
for wondering souls to meet that night
What brings them together they do not know
but the pull is strong so they just let go
and what was once a lost wondering soul
is once again found and then made whole
tired and beaten alone they can not survive
but together as one they feel so alive
what was once sadness is soon replaced
what was once bitterness is soon erased
they soon find passion they thought was lost
and their once cold hearts begin to defrost
the feelings they share soon begin to grow
and where they will lead they do not know
but if together these wondering souls unite
then two less souls will be alone tonight
james ace covington

Enya's photo
Mon 12/03/07 09:16 PM
THATS A GREAT POEM!:heart:

ellgee1976's photo
Mon 12/03/07 09:16 PM
again...wow Ace ;)

LAMom's photo
Mon 12/03/07 09:20 PM
((((( Ace )))))

Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh flowerforyou :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 12/03/07 09:21 PM
Awesome Ace loved it what a great heart you have bigsmile

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Mon 12/03/07 09:22 PM
ty im still trying to get better someday i will write one that i truelly like then i will have to stop writing

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Mon 12/03/07 09:40 PM
you can't stop writing! What would I read?

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Mon 12/03/07 09:54 PM

you can't stop writing! What would I read?

i guess you would have to read my editorial

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Mon 12/03/07 09:58 PM
Edited by TxsGal3333 on Mon 12/03/07 09:58 PM

ty im still trying to get better someday i will write one that i truelly like then i will have to stop writing




Hummm well now you think that will happen for no matter what we write we always feel as if we can do better bigsmile Ace your a very good writer and actually hope you never find that time for I do enjoying reading what you write and would miss them for sure bigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

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Mon 12/03/07 10:01 PM


ty im still trying to get better someday i will write one that i truelly like then i will have to stop writing




Hummm well now you think that will happen for no matter what we write we always feel as if we can do better bigsmile Ace your a very good writer and actually hope you never find that time for I do enjoying reading what you write and would miss them for sure bigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

no im to critical of my own writing and i dont write poetry that often so i dont ever seeing it happening but it might never know