Isn't it amazing
when my heart did flips
crazy moves
and he never knew

about horizontals
or crosses

diagonals when told
only made him look away

as if a nothing place
existed

there must be
a place his heart exists

Beyond his yesterday

Wow.

Thank you for sharing.

Very nice

:)

Poetry helps me to express the pain I now feel. Thank you for reading. Appreciated.

My heart says to stop reading the poem....my mind says to never stop.

This a cool yet complicated poem. I truly love this

Mig..when I write, it's naked honesty...
I am a woman, so prob yes, to many men, complicated.

But here's what I told my 26 yr old son...who is in a long term relationship--

Women are not all that complicated!

Just be kind to her. Take out the trash. Rub her back and neck. Give affection and listen to any complaints she may voice. Take them seriously. And act accordingly...since you love her.

My poems these days are just an expression of emotional pain, an experience I am walking through, one which I truly believed would end happily. And the many layers of pain, are relentless-- due to a fine thread of hope, still. And I'm trying my best to express nakedly and simply.

I probably should not even be on this site--
I am a woman, still in luv.

But he doesn't luv me. He never even met me, in person, face to face, yet.

I only know him thru inkless tones.

( Keyboard)

More sad poems, to come. :)

Thanks 2 all, for reading...and commenting.

Great poem. I hope he meets your needs one day, if not move on....

Thank you for saying that. My friends have all told me the same thing.

I don't quite understand why my heart and mind tend to hang on, in hope, on certain rare occasions--

Sigh.

:)

Rambling on time.

I like your poem. Thanks for sharing.

You express your emotions very well. Sorry for your hurt.