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SEASIDE PICNIC
Your tides of apathy roll my body over the jagged coral wreckage you leave in your wake. Again and again. The indifference tears me to shreds. Scavengers gather at the shoreline to feast on my emptiness, as the sea turns a brilliant scarlet in your honor. Piece after piece washed ashore I always did look good in red kc07 |
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((((( kc ))))))
I have missed your soul,, nice to see you posting |
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thanks mom
you |
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sad kc
emotion is no stranger to your words |
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kc ohh my friend it it time to move on for one that takes you
down is not the one to have around with yur kind soul you surely will find one that loves you as you and will bring you up not down. Very good write |
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TG3333
thank you |
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ooooh .... I felt that! Nicely written!
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Amazing how we can let ppl widdle us away till there's only shreds.
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ArtGurl----thank you it is nice to be felt...coming from you i take that as a hight compliment.
jb---people only take what we are willing to give...shed a tear for the givers thank you both |
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Yeah what Krisit said...I couldn't have said better myself. That was real good Kc...I could feel it in what you were describing.
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yes "feel" is a good way to describe it you have a way of doing that kc
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I felt it- oh I felt it...
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wolf
meandu2 Msbear feeling, through words is done by people with pure hearts and open minds. expressing that feeling shows kindness so, i thank you all |
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thanks kc
hey are we still on for sat. night? |
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yes i am driving to Memphis to night so i will meet you two at the restaurant about 7:00 tomorrow night
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cool and dont worry we are not taking her friend with us...
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ok, lol...
see you two there |
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B B Kings place after we eat?
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i find red a bit much to wear but everyone seems to like it on me
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count on it....
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