Topic: here's another one of my poems tell me what you think
poetwriter72's photo
Fri 11/23/07 11:10 PM
angel with broken wings

angel
you must learn to fly
fly with grace
i can see the pain on your face
you will fly again
please don't cry
just stand and soar
god will heal you with love
take my hand
i will lead you to him
so give me a hug
let me wipe your eyes
fly on my angel
fly high into the sky
learn to fly once more
goodbye my angel
hope to see you again
as my angel left
a tear fell on my face
cause she soared with grace
my heart was filled with emotion
but i know i will see her again
cause she flew away with my heart
and she will hold it forever


yeahitsmeok's photo
Fri 11/23/07 11:14 PM
thats a good one poet!flowerforyou

wouldee's photo
Fri 11/23/07 11:40 PM
beautiful, man.


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no photo
Fri 11/23/07 11:42 PM
Wow that was good!!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 11/24/07 12:02 AM
Nicely done, quite the heart grabber.........

loca's photo
Sat 11/24/07 12:06 AM
nice

pkh's photo
Sat 11/24/07 07:18 AM
Very nice,really enjoyed itflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 11/24/07 11:16 AM
:heart: