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I sat and wondered where to start
A poem, straight from the heart Trying to find a word to begin A few lines to portray the feelings within Bereft of all inspiration But soon childlike excitement replaced the frustration No more wounds from fatal hesitation And so it began, this little citation So hey you, yes you reading this I can't promise a life of bliss But we'd be the envy of Romeo/Juliet, Carousel and Brigadoon So what d'ya say You want to be inspiration for the next great love play? |
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Beautiful poem
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I enjoyed reading your poem, joe
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Wow, that is beautiful joe
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Wistful sentiment delivered with good rhyme and flow. A pleasure to read, Joe.
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Be not bereft. I think you found it.
Something from the void Joe. That menacing blank page defeated by the idea of itself. Innovative! Excellent! |
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like music to the ears
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I've just read your poem and it's like you've said out loud what I think , and feel , bang on !
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