Topic: I could use some constructive criticism
HypnoticAngel's photo
Sat 01/14/17 03:23 PM
Please take the time to read my profile and tell me what you think, thank you

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Sat 01/14/17 03:46 PM
I though it was a great profile and your love of laughter is evident

Best of luck

Tom4Uhere's photo
Sat 01/14/17 03:54 PM
Looks good - I hope you find who you are looking for ~ Good Luck!

Mike6615's photo
Sat 01/14/17 04:29 PM
Edited by Mike6615 on Sat 01/14/17 04:33 PM
Great profile! I agree with Tom4uhere. A lot of rain where you live?

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Sat 01/14/17 04:38 PM
Nice.
I like your username.
I was in a trance as I read your profile :/

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Sat 01/14/17 05:06 PM
Nice profile, clean and simple, have fun, be safe.

IgorFrankensteen's photo
Sat 01/14/17 05:16 PM
I'm not great at reviews, but I will suggest some minor things for you to consider.

I think you would improve it if you fix some small English errors.

The one long sentence with most of your descriptors in it, is a little hard to read, because it seems to come out in a rush of relatively unrelated subjects. You might consider breaking it up a bit. I especially had trouble making the leap from "I don't have pets so that I can travel," and "you just don't know what I'm going to say next." I had to read it several times, to figure out why pets and speech patterns were on your mind at the same time.

Another small thing: "go to drug" should be "go-to drug." Without the dash, the reader expects something about going to a drug store or something.

You might consider adding some clarifications about what you are after in a male. In that, for example, I deduced that you would prefer a male who like you, doesn't have pets, or can afford to board them in order to feed your hunger for travel.

But on the other hand, sometimes it's smart to keep things short as you have, to allow for more people to consider themselves as potential matches. Up to you.


AtxliveMusic's photo
Sun 01/15/17 09:33 AM
I wouldnt change anything.

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Tue 01/17/17 07:43 AM
Hello sweetheart , I rather enjoyed your profile . It is apparent that laughter is your main drug ! I would definitely recommend removing the sentence pertaining to you being divorced for 6yrs , as well as the being single . Your profile already indicates you are "Divorced!" May your love and laughter be found in 2017!

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Tue 01/17/17 09:06 AM
Blue/green eyes...and a redhead...what's not to like.tongue2

coloradodreamer1010's photo
Wed 01/18/17 12:27 PM
The profile is fine...it's too bad you don't live in Denver...I have a great sense of humor and the country you want to visit the most (Italy) I used to live there...I hope you find someone..I'm Steve