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Edited by
Snugglesbyfire
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Thu 11/15/07 04:04 PM
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The coldness gets deeper into the bones
The snow and ice is starting to fall The winds cut through you like a sharpened knife Winter is upon us The sun appears but is so far away that the warmth it spreads is a dream for another day So what can we do Drag out those extra blankets Turn up that heat Snuggle down on the couch with a good book in hand Throw a log on the fireplace and Watch the flames appear as the coldness seeps out of your bones on this cold winters eve Watch the snow and ice from the warmth of your living room chair Chase the winds away with a nice glass of beer Stay cozy and warm As winter creates its dance For the dreary cold days are upon us now but friends from afar will keep the warmth going for those of us who know winters fury PMS still trying out this new style of writing......... |
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I like it.
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Good job snuggles
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Thank you BRM and Digger
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i like it too and i also find that style harder than most to express whaty u truly mean
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Wow!gurly;U been writing while I was taking a hiatus.I'm impressed.I like this change very much.Ur showing much more depth & sustenance here.I'm really digging the"cold in my bones'and how U reach deeper into the true effects of winter & how it affects humans & there fragility 2 Mother Nature.Well I could go furthor here but U get my drift.I luv it sweetheart.Keep workin this angle K.Godspeed!Cybear(((bear~hug))):=)
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Thank you Doesnt I am just writing what comes to mind, and I also write on the spur of the moment.......when I sit down and try to write nothing works out.
ahhhhhh I gave you a nice surprise Cybear, actually I haven't been writing much been in a long dry spell........maybe because of all that is going on in my offline life........who knows Im just happy that I am writing again....and enjoying this new style oh I love those bear hugs |
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