Topic: Winters Dance
Snugglesbyfire's photo
Thu 11/15/07 04:03 PM
Edited by Snugglesbyfire on Thu 11/15/07 04:04 PM
The coldness gets deeper into the bones
The snow and ice is starting to fall
The winds cut through you like a sharpened knife
Winter is upon us
The sun appears but is so far away
that the warmth it spreads is a dream for another day
So what can we do
Drag out those extra blankets
Turn up that heat
Snuggle down on the couch
with a good book in hand
Throw a log on the fireplace and Watch the flames appear
as the coldness seeps out of your bones
on this cold winters eve
Watch the snow and ice from the warmth of your living room chair
Chase the winds away with a nice glass of beer
Stay cozy and warm
As winter creates its dance
For the dreary cold days are upon us now
but friends from afar will keep the warmth going
for those of us who know winters fury

PMS

still trying out this new style of writing.........flowerforyou


digger56's photo
Thu 11/15/07 04:09 PM
I like it. drinker

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 11/15/07 04:11 PM
Good job snuggles:smile: flowerforyou

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Thu 11/15/07 04:14 PM
Thank you BRMflowerforyou and Diggerflowerforyou



doesnt_play_well's photo
Thu 11/15/07 05:02 PM
i like it too and i also find that style harder than most to express whaty u truly mean

no photo
Thu 11/15/07 05:17 PM
Wow!gurly;U been writing while I was taking a hiatus.I'm impressed.I like this change very much.Ur showing much more depth & sustenance here.I'm really digging the"cold in my bones'and how U reach deeper into the true effects of winter & how it affects humans & there fragility 2 Mother Nature.Well I could go furthor here but U get my drift.I luv it sweetheart.Keep workin this angle K.Godspeed!Cybear(((bear~hug))):=)
:tongue: flowerforyou

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Thu 11/15/07 05:27 PM
Thank you Doesntflowerforyou I am just writing what comes to mind, and I also write on the spur of the moment.......when I sit down and try to write nothing works out.


ahhhhhh I gave you a nice surprise Cybear, actually I haven't been writing much been in a long dry spell........maybe because of all that is going on in my offline life........who knows Im just happy that I am writing again....and enjoying this new styleflowerforyou flowerforyou oh I love those bear hugsbigsmile

LAMom's photo
Thu 11/15/07 10:09 PM
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